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The Ever After Part
02-05-2012, 12:09 PM
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RE: The Ever After Part
(02-05-2012 11:52 AM)d. b. wilyumz Wrote:  
(02-05-2012 12:32 AM)Firefly Wrote:  You don't like the plot idea?

The basic story problem seems to be how to justify what the female lead does -- he's a directionless slacker and she's got a career, fiance, and lives by the rules. So why does she throw it all over for this younger, immature guy? Hot sex isn't enough -- she could have her fling and then get back to business. Her motivation has to be believable or the story won't work.

I see what you're saying. Like it doesn't quite make sense like what you said about the motivation of the female character. But the way you're making it sound (or probably just the story) it sounds like the relationship between the characters in the Notebook.

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The Ever After Part - Firefly - 02-01-2012, 06:30 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - mirandagirl - 02-01-2012, 06:58 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 02-01-2012, 10:44 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fruitfly - 02-02-2012, 07:37 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - mirandagirl - 02-02-2012, 01:36 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 02-03-2012, 06:03 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - BEE. - 02-03-2012, 08:13 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fruitfly - 02-03-2012, 09:18 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 02-05-2012, 12:32 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - d. b. wilyumz - 02-05-2012, 11:52 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - mirandagirl - 02-05-2012 12:09 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fruitfly - 02-05-2012, 12:12 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - d. b. wilyumz - 02-06-2012, 10:59 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - mirandagirl - 02-05-2012, 12:37 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 02-05-2012, 12:51 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - chri5tin3 - 02-06-2012, 02:56 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-02-2012, 02:29 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 05-26-2012, 12:10 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-26-2012, 06:50 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - d. b. wilyumz - 05-26-2012, 11:09 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 05-26-2012, 12:06 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - mirandagirl - 05-26-2012, 03:35 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-26-2012, 07:41 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 05-26-2012, 10:49 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-27-2012, 01:53 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 05-27-2012, 10:46 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-28-2012, 07:22 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 05-28-2012, 10:18 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-28-2012, 11:57 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 05-29-2012, 12:07 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-29-2012, 02:17 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 05-29-2012, 05:26 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-29-2012, 08:22 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 05-29-2012, 10:40 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-30-2012, 03:21 AM
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RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-30-2012, 07:54 PM
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RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-31-2012, 12:45 AM
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RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 05-31-2012, 03:47 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 06-01-2012, 10:37 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 06-01-2012, 08:11 PM
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RE: The Ever After Part - Fearless - 06-02-2012, 09:38 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 06-03-2012, 12:54 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 06-06-2012, 02:39 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - tofu - 06-07-2012, 12:04 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 06-07-2012, 08:45 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - d. b. wilyumz - 06-08-2012, 02:01 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - mirandagirl - 06-08-2012, 05:22 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Londonlipton - 06-07-2012, 12:25 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - tofu - 06-07-2012, 09:29 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 06-08-2012, 12:21 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - tofu - 06-08-2012, 08:30 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - d. b. wilyumz - 06-09-2012, 02:47 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - mirandagirl - 06-08-2012, 08:47 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 06-09-2012, 08:46 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - mirandagirl - 06-09-2012, 03:01 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 06-09-2012, 03:13 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - mirandagirl - 06-09-2012, 03:17 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - cosmic bliss - 06-09-2012, 07:08 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - tofu - 06-09-2012, 08:33 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - d. b. wilyumz - 06-10-2012, 11:07 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - Firefly - 06-09-2012, 09:43 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - tofu - 06-10-2012, 11:15 AM
RE: The Ever After Part - d. b. wilyumz - 06-11-2012, 01:49 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - mirandagirl - 06-11-2012, 01:59 PM
RE: The Ever After Part - d. b. wilyumz - 06-12-2012, 02:09 PM
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