which picture? and poem.

[emily.]

im entering a photography contest and idk which picture i should enter what do you guys think?

#1http://photos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-sf2p/v253/161/9/725840197/n725840197_3167729_688.jpg (http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=3167730&id=725840197)

#2http://photos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-sf2p/v253/161/9/725840197/n725840197_3167730_1339.jpg (http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=3167730&id=725840197)

and do you think i sohuld enter this poem or just skip it.
yes or no.
be brutally honest :]

because i know you'd love
the beautiful people
im walking down the street with now
our heels clicking on the wet asphalt
that sparkles in the artificial lights
but the sirens and the sounds
of the busy city
even in the moonlight
surround and consume us
they drown out the sound of our laughter
and just for one brief second i think of you
i wonder where you are now
back home in the peace and serenity
of our broken town
and i remember what we used to do on a night like this


thanks you guys are baaabes for helping meee (:

[breakthrough.]

the 2nd one is gorgeous. i love it.
and that poem is amazing.
honestly (:

[designer_skyline.]

the second one's really artistic,
i love it. (:

and the poem is amazing,
you've got skills. [=

[emily.]

thank you guys (:

[iloveyoudude]

i agree with the rest of them (:
espesh about the poem, wow.

[IMAGINE THE LOVE.]

the second one (: &definitely use the poem!

[annzie]

i love both the pictures, but the second one.
& you have amazing poem skills. (:

[dream_np]

#2 i amazing!

[zero gravity.]

i like both pictures
and the poem is amazing. (:

[ZacGal101]

i love both the pics but id totally go with #2!
and the poem kinda matches the with the picture,
its a great poem((:

[mysweetmemory]

the poem is amazing!
you're gorgeous, btw (:

[zeinaaa.]

I love the second one (:
and the poem is beutiful, you should definitely enter it!

[diana bear]

the poem is fine. it's not a Death Cab for Cutie song, but it's fine.
and the pictures.. well, if you really want me to be brutally honest, they both look really amateur.

i'm just being honest.
and i also write and am a photographer.

[emily.]

thankss, i appreciate your honesty :]
i entered the second one.
if you want to give me some advice sometime on how I could make them look less amateur (which I am haha) I would really appreciate it

[weareoxygen]

the first one is too over exposed, which would be okay if you
werent wearing white, but you are. so i say the second one.
i like the concept of photo #2, but there is something about the
placement that strikes me as odd.

what type of camera are you using?

[emily.]

idk, some fujifilm one haha its not very good.
but thankss

[Ritta]

the second picture and enter the poem :)

[x christiex24]

i really like picture 2
its really interesting
and the poem is awesome
go for it!