theee official poetry thread. bam.

[contagious.]

i wake up to your memories,
your voice to my melody.
my broken heart lies inside
my chest, i'm such a mess.
we're as good as gone,
becoming one.
the static ringing in my ears,
you never should have left,
my dear.
tear - stained cheeks,
i fear i'll break, nothing
but a fake.
you'll lure me in and
let me fall, and i'll
enjoy it all.

[betterintime.]

your poems never fail to amaze me. (:
person i've never met before. *wink*

[Free.Again.]

Not bad. good job.<3

[angeeela.]

amazing, as usual. (:

[contagious.]

thankss.

[betterintime.]

ahahahah.
i edited my post.

[contagious.]

lmao.
yay.

[betterintime.]

hahahaha.
you make me laugh.
'hi karli. person i've never met before'
LMFAOOOOO.

[contagious.]

lmfaoo.
:]]

[efronator.]

wow, i was a noob. we don't need a fricken
list of who joined this thread. (:
haha, wow. we don't need rules either,
seemings i'm a rulebreaker!

[betterintime.]

i don't wanna join because i suck at poetry;
but you need to get BRI in here. she writes
some of the most amazing poems i've ever read.

[contagious.]

haha i love karliiii.
:]]
i'll join, dear.

[efronator.]

^^yess! I wanted that to happen.
^^^ i know karli, she is like amazing at this stuff. and who cares if you suck, i do but i love writing it.

[contagious.]

i'll sit here and talk to the rain,
anything to take away the pain.
just to feel you again, and taste
your skin as you take my hand.
i'll sit here and wish you were
beside me, as you leave.
i saw it in your eyes, my heart in
my chest, hidden inside.
so whisper in my ear & tell me goodbye,
your love will last a lifetime.


new onee.

[efronator.]

Discover the world with me, put your palm with thee; we will run around the world in a blink of an eye; only us baby, you and i.NEW

M tears are falling on the concrete;wishing you were here with me;memories flodding my head; i want to say; i love you. NEw

bri that poem was like... a million times better than any of my poems will ever be. Great work!

[LittleCurL_]

i wanna join i have some good stuff...haha

You can’t tell me what to do this time.
I’m done having other people run my life.
I want to spread my wings
And fly free
I’ve never felt like this before
My life is mine and mine alone
To do as I wish
My dreams are coming true

I actually took part of this and am using it to write a song for my band

[betterintime.]

woah briiiii.
i love it. (:
[can i post in here, even if i don't join? lmfao]

[LittleCurL_]

sry my computer's being stupid it did a double post

[Gamer.]

There's already a thread for everything like this and things related to it.

[efronator.]

woah briiiii.
i love it. (:
[can i post in here, even if i don't join? lmfao]

ahah sure.. why not!

[angeeela.]

i would love to join.
but i do not have ANY poetic skillz.
so. i shall read and be like "HOT DAMN, YOU'RE AMAZING"
at every single one. (:

[contagious.]

woah briiiii.
i love it. (:
[can i post in here, even if i don't join? lmfao]
thankss. :]

[betterintime.]

i would love to join.
but i do not have ANY poetic skillz.
so. i shall read and be like "HOT DAMN, YOU'RE AMAZING"
at every single one. (:

AGREED.
i'm with angela.
i shall join; and be like
HOT DAMN, YOU'RE AMAZING
because I have no poetic skillz. (;

[betterintime.]

thankss. :]


aww no problem. <3

[contagious.]

unravel my fantasy,
lure me in.
light my match and blow it out,
i hope you're happy now.
walk away, leave the words
unspoken, i'll find someone
to take your place. i'll
lure you in and you'll take
my fall, i'll have it all.
i should have known
you'd make me cry,
and waste my time.
but now the tables are turned,
you're the one who'll get burned.

[contagious.]

eh, not my best.

[contagious.]

i'll fall to the ground,
tears falling, not making
a sound.
you've taken me, dead
at the scene.
i'll sit with my
head in my hands,
trying to understand.
how can you love someone,
need their touch, need it so much.
take a breath and
look me in the eyes,
i'll take in every one of
your lies.

[contagious.]

ahah this thing died.

[betterintime.]

ahhh karli is hereee. (:
and woah. i deff like the
second one ^ and the first
one is awesomeee. (:

[angeeela.]

i like this thread. jonas brothers don't blind me when i click it. (:

and bri = amazingness. <3

[Gamer.]

i like this thread. jonas brothers don't blind me when i click it. (:

and bri = amazingness. <3

Why do you have to be like that? It doesn't matter.

[Gamer.]

Plus...I edited all that stuff.

[contagious.]

thanks guys.
<3. (:

[efronator.]

my tears are falling on the concrete;wishing you were here with me; memories flodding my head; i want to say; i love you.

That sucked. hahah.

[betterintime.]

ahahahah. aww. i liked it ^

[fkkkyeahh.]

The Pain from the Bottle
the little boy wonders why his dad acts the way he does,
and he wishes he knew who his dad really was.
for his dad takes his stress out on him,
just minutes after his lips leave the bottle rim.
the little boy cries in fear as his dad goes wild,
he wonders how someone could do this to a little child.
this wasn't the first time that this has happened,
he felt like his house was hell, a place he was trapped in.
he didn't know it yet, but the little boy would soon die,
not from disease, not from an accident, but by his father, who wouldn't even cry.



yes, i just made this up as i went along. it's kind of a personal thing for me.
so yeahh. whatcha thinkk.

[betterintime.]

awwww.
ok that seriously made me cry.
that is really freaking deep.
and amazing. ♥

[. spreadthepeace]

omfg .
i almost had tears.

[angelaa.]

is there a reason that there are
two threads for this same poem.. ?

anyway. i thought it was really good.

[Gamer.]

Awesome.

There is an Official Creative Thread you can post others in.

[efronator.]

Thanks, but mine will never be as good as bri, no matter how many poems i write.

[Gamer.]

There is already a thread to post poems, and other creative things.
If you have already read my previous post, I have a feeling you ignored
them. I am just trying to reduce the amount of similar threads.

[angeeela.]

my tears are falling on the concrete;wishing you were here with me; memories flodding my head; i want to say; i love you.

That sucked. hahah.

aww, i liked that.
it was really good.
so i shall say...

HOT DAMN, YOU'RE AMAZING!
(:

[I_luffyouu]

that was great but sad im a sap for things like that lol

[Lia.]

that honestly made me tear up.
its deep.

i think you're a good writer.
definitely.

[ymmy123e]

thats really sad, but really good

[IDIZZLE]

woah, that's really good I'm crying...

[biznatch]

those were really nice words and some kids do get it like that but that was really touching and sad at the same time

[contagious.]

There is already a thread to post poems, and other creative things.
If you have already read my previous post, I have a feeling you ignored
them. I am just trying to reduce the amount of similar threads.
leaaavee.
i beg you.

[contagious.]

Thanks, but mine will never be as good as bri, no matter how many poems i write.
oh shush,
you're amazing too.
:]

[contagious.]

you'll cut me open,
leave me with scars,
closing doors.
the rain hits the roof,
we're living proof,
i remember when you
told me you loved me,
you promised you'd never leave.
i remember when you said
i was the one, and your love,
i would drown in.
i remember when i lost my mind,
deeper meanings behind
your blue eyes.

[Bekah]

Merging this thread into the proper thread.

Thanks

[Gamer.]

leaaavee.
i beg you.

I'm just trying to reduce the amount of similar threads
that are made when there is one made for it already.

[angeeela.]

Merging this thread into the proper thread.

Thanks


I'm just trying to reduce the amount of similar threads
that are made when there is one made for it already.

if you look above, bekah put koree's poem into this thread.
so if the mods don't have a problem with it, it's fine.
this is made for sharing the amazing poems, not telling others there's another thread.

[Gamer.]

if you look above, bekah put koree's poem into this thread.
so if the mods don't have a problem with it, it's fine.
this is made for sharing the amazing poems, not telling others there's another thread.

I know. If they feel having a thread to discuss poems,
when there is a proper place to do that, then fine. You can share poems
in the other thread. If you look in the "Official Creative Thread" a friend and I
posted poems and discussed them. If it's about the Jonas Brothers that's
bothering you, I took that banner down a while ago. I'm making another one.

[contagious.]

eep.
i'm kinda drained.
and braindead.
no poems tonightt.

[Gamer.]

I hope you get some rest and you're inspiration back. :)
It isn't cool when you lose it or feel drained. I will have
a lot of ideas and then I feel drained or brain dead.
Yet, that only happens sometimes.

[kaitlyn]

my secret shadow
Feels like the world is split into two;
Everything that's happening is light and dark.
In the day I conceal myself with a mask,
Hoping to be seen among others.

To be noticed just to not be alone,
My second face shows no sadness.
A face showing no emotions
Only a smile to show the world.

The eye sees that I am ordinary.
But when the sun begins to fade,
I return to where I belong while
There is little daylight left.

Darkness has finally set in,
A moon its only weakness.
My mask begins to fade
By the dimness of the closing minutes.

A tear drop of sadness,
Anger soon to take control.
I quickly turn on the lamp
To save my dying smile.

The stillness of the night triumphs
Until the dark is awakened by brightness.
Tonight, my only companion will be
My secret shadow.

[efronator.]

Awww. guys. Thanks. Like, those come from a ten year old girl that loves zac. And puts taht into poems. Or whatever i feel like. Like breakups.
Whoever loved my poem and commented, i love you .haha. =)

New poem:
You make it hard for me to breathe, why do you have to be next to me? The power of love takes over our bodies, forever together,this is not a comedy.

[Gamer.]

:].

[alyssa leigh.]

well, i saw how amazing all these poems were
and i decided to try it out. i've written poetry b4,
but i never thought i was any good at it.. o well.
here's a few i wrote earlier tonight.
tell me what you think.

believe:
there's a voice inside of me just waiting to come out.
all my life i've waited for this chance,
the chance to prove myself to the world.
to show everyone who i am,
to show everyone who i have become.
all i need is one chance,
just one chance to let it all out.
to sing at the top of my lungs,
to sing until it reaches the heavens.
all i need is one chance.
the chance to prove myself to the world.
there is a voice inside of me.
all i have to do is believe,
believe in myself,
believe that i have the power.
the power to change the world,
the power to change my life.
and all i have to do is
believe.

butterflies:
i wish i could get butterflies
like when i first met you.
the butterflies would excite me
and you would make me smile.

i wish i could have a sweet-smelling flower
like i did the day i met you.
my flower would lure you to me
and make you hold my hand.

i wish i could turn back time
so the butterflies would not fly away
and my flower would not wilt.

and i wish you would come back to me
like a butterfly
to it's own special flower.

distress:
i would give it all
just to see your smiling face,
to say i love you.

i told you i'd be upset.
i told you it wouldn't help.

[Mikey]

I wrote this last month because I was a wee bit down, I like writing stuff when I'm down, it keeps me occupied, xD! I showed it to like two of my friends and they both said it would be awesome as a song, heh. What do you think? :confused:

Tell me...



There comes a time that we all must change
And even though life can treat us strange
Everyone grows in there own special way
And I've learnt to cherish every day

Somethings happen that cant be explained
And we must let go of all we obtained
We must learn that it's all forgone
We must learn that it's time to move on

But cant you just...

Tell me that you want me
Tell me that you need me
Tell me that you love me
Tell me things I wish were true
Because now it's being left unsaid
And I can't get these thoughts out of my head

It makes me feel so small
It makes me think "Was I loved at all?"
Its just that you used to care now your never there
And It feels so wrong to have the biggest part of me gone
Why can't we just be friends
That'd be better than not having you at all
I dont understand why you made us be apart
Do you even know what it feels like to have a broken heart


I Know we all make mistakes
I know at one point everyones heart aches
But we must learn to forgive and forget
You only get one life to live
But what do you do when the reason you were living is gone


I tried so hard to make it right
I tried so hard to make it work
I always treated you right, day and night
So what did I do to deserve your spite?

Why cant you just..

Tell me that you want me
Tell me that you need me
Tell me that you love me
Tell me things I wish were true
Because now it's being left unsaid
And I cant get these thoughts out of my head


I guess reality is you never intended to stay
So why did you build me up to just throw me away
You wasted my love and my time
because all along you were never really mine

I thought I had set all my future plans
Just to realise it was never in my hands
If you loved me then why did you do this
What made you play such hurtful tricks


Why can't you just...


Tell me that you want me
Tell me that you need me
Tell me that you love me
Tell me things I wish were true
Because now it's being left unsaid
And I can't get these thoughts out of my head


It makes me feel so hurt to think you said forever
Now you got me wishing it would of been never
I cant believe I fell under your stupid spell


Why do I want to be your friend when you've torn me apart
But still... you remain in my dreams and in my heart
Why do I even care, you let me down because now you're never there
Promises are made to be kept, this is so hard to accept
Theres no mistaking my heart is breaking
But what can I do, accept try and get over you?

I wish I could say I hate you, but I know I never will
And I'm not afraid to admit it, yes I do love you still.

You taught me the higher your lifted
The deeper you fall
Now I'm wishing I never fell in love at all
You stole my heart then threw it away
Then you ran off and left me in such a bad way

Why did you...

Why did you tell me you wanted me
Why did you tell me you needed me
Why did you tell me you loved me
Why did I believe it was true
I guess it's better being left unsaid

Because now I'm going to get these thoughs out of my head...

[kaitlyn]

wow this is very good! Much better then what I can do!

[LittleCurL_]

haha man that's good haha you could make it into a song i made a short pome into a song

[Mikey]

Lol, thankyou Kaitlyn, and I don't know how to do that, Courtney, I can't sing to save my life && I couldn't work out the keys or notes it would be sung in, lo

[LittleCurL_]

it's not tought but i wrote a poem and used some of hte lines but it was funny i was getting in the shower anda song came on and i liek the beat and kind of put the wrds to in and made the chorus and then i know how i want to sing it so i need to write lyrics to it i had them but in my head one night i had the perfect thing but never wrotehtem down so i am remebering bit by bit haha anyway yeah i sing and a friend of mine who play hte gituar is goign to help me put music to it nad we're going to sing it in our band so i'm super excited haha
um.... yeah it's not that hard to do but if you want i can see what i can come up with.....

[Mikey]

it's not tought but i wrote a poem and used some of hte lines but it was funny i was getting in the shower anda song came on and i liek the beat and kind of put the wrds to in and made the chorus and then i know how i want to sing it so i need to write lyrics to it i had them but in my head one night i had the perfect thing but never wrotehtem down so i am remebering bit by bit haha anyway yeah i sing and a friend of mine who play hte gituar is goign to help me put music to it nad we're going to sing it in our band so i'm super excited haha
um.... yeah it's not that hard to do but if you want i can see what i can come up with.....


:o omg that would be so good if you could, LOL!! :D

[Bekah]

Merged.
(:

[LittleCurL_]

:o omg that would be so good if you could, LOL!! :D
yeah le t me see what i can come up with i can't put it to music but i can probally mae it flow into a song form then i may be able to put it to music ifi i ask my friend to do me a favor but he loves me so it might work haha buth ten we have to get it to you whick would be a chalange haha
we'll figure it out haha
i'll try my best not 100% sure it will work

[Mikey]

Merged.
(:


Sorry, Bekah, this thread wasn't stickied, so I didn't think it was actually offical xD

Thankyou for merging it. :)

[LittleCurL_]

ok haha i've got it i like it yeha i'm gonna have my friend work on it with me haha
do you mind ig i take a few words out here and there i'll send you it before i take it to my friend i like it so far it flows nicely with the rythem i have going haha
kk let me know what you think

[Mikey]

yeah le t me see what i can come up with i can't put it to music but i can probally mae it flow into a song form then i may be able to put it to music ifi i ask my friend to do me a favor but he loves me so it might work haha buth ten we have to get it to you whick would be a chalange haha
we'll figure it out haha
i'll try my best not 100% sure it will work

Lmao. It would be a wee bit of a challenge, possibly you could upload it to http://www.megaupload.com/ or something, if you would actually go through all that trouble for me :P thankyou btw!! :D

[Mikey]

yeah le t me see what i can come up with i can't put it to music but i can probally mae it flow into a song form then i may be able to put it to music ifi i ask my friend to do me a favor but he loves me so it might work haha buth ten we have to get it to you whick would be a chalange haha
we'll figure it out haha
i'll try my best not 100% sure it will work



Sure-- do what you like to it :P, i have no problem at all with what ya do xD

[contagious.]

i'll fade into the walls,
static-ringing phonecalls.
you'll be on the other line,
as you tell me another lie.
i'll break myself down,
as the tears fall to the ground.
i'll beg for your touch,
need it so much.
you'll break me down
and steal my heart,
but i won't want it back;
as we break apart, losing it so fast.
i'll fade into the walls once
more, as i close my heart's door.

[efronator.]

^^ =0
Im in the making of more poems.

[efronator.]

I just want to touch your skin, make your spine shiver again and again. our love is from sea to sea, he doesnt see it, but i do, and all this love is coming for you.

[contagious.]

^ aw. that's awesomee.

the pistol shines so bright,
he'll look in her eyes,
feel her heart till it bursts,
she won't be his first.
the mistake stands in front of her,
the words ringing in her ears,
begging for more.
he'll pull the trigger and
and watch her fall apart,
leaving his mark.
he'll kiss her lips and tell her
goodbye, satisfaction in his eyes.

[Mikey]

That's really good, Catchmyfall!

but I have to say, 'll fade into the walls,
static-ringing phonecalls.
you'll be on the other line,
as you tell me another lie.
i'll break myself down,
as the tears fall to the ground.
i'll beg for your touch,
need it so much.
you'll break me down
and steal my heart,
but i won't want it back;
as we break apart, losing it so fast.
i'll fade into the walls once
more, as i close my heart's door.

is my favorite one out of thoes two ^_^ it's brilliant <3

[contagious.]

haha thanks. :]
i'm bri, btw.

[Mikey]

Welcome, i'm mikey btw--- if you couldn't guess ;)

[kaitlyn]

Im Not Perfect


looking in the mirror, wiping my eyes,
looking at that horrible thing staring back at me,
how can this be?
you're suppose to be beautiful, not ugly!
you're suppose to be skinny, but your fat!
you're suppose be something i want you to be!, but you're nothing!

im sorry, im sorry im not perfect,
im sorry, im sorry im not so "pretty"
im sorry, im sorry im not what you want me to be,
im not perfect, and nor are you,
so just go do what you do, and let me be.

walking among the halls,
and looking at those walls,
trying to not look, look at those laughing faces,
and trying not to look at all this mess,
im in stress, how can this be?
you're suppose to be hot, but your not!
you're suppose to be everything, but you're just sh*t!
you're suppose to be a like me, but your just a geek!

im sorry, im sorry for not being "hot"
im sorry, im sorry for not being everything everyone dreamed of,
im sorry, im sorry im not some sl*tty cheerleader that'd gets on her knees and open her mouth just to get a guy!
im not perfect, and nor are you,
so just go do what you do, and let me be.

lies, tears, broken hearts, drama, ALL!
im so sick of all this mess!
im such in stress, im so depressed,
see those marks?! see those on my arms?!



ahh this one isn't finshed yet,but I guess Im stuck right now....

[contagious.]

^^ hey mikeyy.
and wow, kaitlyn.
that's good.
:]]

[contagious.]

what a gorgeous mess we've made,
the love, all that's fake.
you'll hold my hand,
but in the end;
we'll never understand.
the space between us,
the wall, and the sky above.
something's struck me,
maybe love ?

[kaitlyn]

[quote=_catchmyfall.;3345722]^^ hey mikeyy.
and wow, kaitlyn.
that's good.
:]][/quote
lol thanks but I think It could be a lot better.

[contagious.]

keep working on it theenn.
:]]

[contagious.]

the tears will fall,
maybe we're meant
for more.
i'll kiss your lips, and
want your love, check
all of the above.
this'll be my first time with you,
we can't hide from the truth.
you'll burn my skin with your flame,
you'll cut me open, and i'll bleed,
bleed for you and scream your name.
i'll cry for you, but what i don't know,
is that you'll always be here, my favorite
mistake, and closest one, you are, dear.

[efronator.]

sorry for not posting anything, im really sickk.

[contagious.]

aw. get betterr.
:]

[contagious.]

slow down,
together, we'll breakdown.
the shadows on the wall,
you'll set me up and i'll
take your fall.
i'll breathe in,
just to touch your skin again.
i'll open up and let your love
ignite me, throw away the peices.
i'll dissapear, you'll breathe in my air.
awaken me, you've taken what you need.
together we'll breakdown,
not making a sound.

[contagious.]

i feel the tingle creeping
up my spine, losing time.
my heart beat, so weak.
the tears fill my eyes,
please tell me lies.

[contagious.]

we're fading, with
evey word you're saying.
slow winter around us,
we're alone now, the tears
hitting the hardwood floor.
the wounds healing,
this melancholy feeling bringing
us down, i'll give up all i have
just to be next to you and feel
your touch, feel your love.
it's about time we open up,
bring on the love, bring
on your touch, and
your heart next to mine,
secrets hidden in your eyes.

[contagious.]

i don't have the strength to
let you go; no.
you make me regret things,
feelings i can't explain.
can't you believe every word i say ?
please don't leave; stay, and let me in.
i promise i'll be all you need,
your love, harmony, and every thing in between.
i'll be crying alone tonight, wasting away,
waiting for you to come back, please stay.

[contagious.]

haha.
tons of poeeems.
:]

[contagious.]

your looks decieving,
losing all the information
i'm recieving.
my heart skips beats;
let me bleed.
the way i feel breaks
the ice, bringing you down
on me, feeling your fingers on my skin.
you'll take my breath away,
press your hands to mine,
and make me feel alive.

[I_luffyouu]

i would join but i write stories not poetry

[Free.Again.]

we're fading, with
evey word you're saying.
slow winter around us,
we're alone now, the tears
hitting the hardwood floor.
the wounds healing,
this melancholy feeling bringing
us down, i'll give up all i have
just to be next to you and feel
your touch, feel your love.
it's about time we open up,
bring on the love, bring
on your touch, and
your heart next to mine,
secrets hidden in your eyes.

Wow bri thats really good.
I wish i could write stuff like that lol.

[contagious.]

haha thanks. :]

[contagious.]

i fear i'll fall
apart at the touch
of your lips on mine,
the way we waste time.
suffocating in my own mind,
a little longer and i'll be fine.
i hope you'll kiss me and leave
me with nothing, dead feelings
and hearts breaking.
tear me apart at the seams,
it's all the same, so fake
and unreal, this is how i feel.
i'll set you up to take my fall,
break your heart, tear you apart.
i won't let you take me,
so sit back and watch,
we'll fall, and lose it all.

[. spreadthepeace]

dangg bri has talentt =]

[contagious.]

psh.
more like you.

[. spreadthepeace]

hahhaa yee rightt.

[contagious.]

:].

[kaitlyn]

I Want to Cry


I want to cry But I can't
Nothing in my world is clear
I'm so tired of pretending
Images grow wavey through my tears
I beat my fists into the walls
Slowly I give up the fight
I want to scream through the sobs
I need your grace tonight Crying to the God I want to know
I'm giving You my load
I pass to You my scars
Your blood has overflowed
:roll::-(:(

[kaitlyn]

no love
no lovers
no valentine
to be mine
no boy to give the world to
no boy to just embrace
on the eve of the 14th
Love becomes a race
Jones sodas by the fire
Kissing Cliffs is where we fall
Rejection, defeat, broken hearted
With prospects of new love, we seem to stall
Can't start up this connection
Can't fabricate a lie
Alone again this Feburary
Asking why we should even try?
I know there are others out there
standing single, on their own
But the world's too shy to feel
Hearts turning solid as stone
Cupid's on no lookout
No arrows on patrol
So better make your move now
You're only half in control
Love is Pure, Love is wHoLe.

[kaitlyn]

Go ahead, laugh at me
I don't care anymore
Go ahead, make fun of me
I'll just try to ignore

Just because I'm different
I don't have to be crazy
Just because I hate cheerleading
I don't have to be lazy

I like black with bright colours
So... What does it matter?
I have a different style
That doesn't mean you're better!

I don't wear expensive clothes,
I'm not addicted to my phone
Who cares I'm different!
Just leave me alone

Go ahead, laugh at me
I don't care anymore
Go ahead, make fun of me
I'll just try to ignore

You guys are laughing at me, because I'm 'different'.
I laugh at you guys, 'Cause you're all the same.

[contagious.]

we're fading,
losing it all,
i'll hold you as we fall.
we'll hit the bottom and break,
the walls will hit the ground
around us, break the silence,
your hands and fingertips,
your kiss on my lips.
i'll long for words to
explain, pretty-pictured frame.
we'll fade out just like
old photographs, go with the wind
and love more than ever, oh, what a sin.
the world doesn't matter anymore,
close the door.

[contagious.]

:].

[instantclassic.]

very niicee.

[contagious.]

thankss.

[betterintime.]

ohemfreakinggee.
another fxcking amazing
poem by briiiiiii. :]
[WOAH THAT RHYMED]
wtf idk how to spell. =/

[Free.Again.]

Pretty good!.

[contagious.]

thanks guyss.
(:

[efronator.]

=00 Jelousss!
=) Great jobb briiiiii. =00000000000000000
Great. job.

[angeeela.]

:]
amazingly brilliant.

[contagious.]

:] thanks.

[efronator.]

My heart is shattering like glass;
like my heart;the one that used to be;
never let go; this heartbreak;
hand in hand;
eye contact is key;
just once more;
say it again;
i love you i love you;
the whisper in my head.

[contagious.]

:]]

[IMAGINE THE LOVE.]

you should becomee a songwriter;; there's a lot moneyy in that industry
just don't forget meh ;]

[contagious.]

haha. aw.
i won't.
:]

[angelaa.]

it's wonderfuuuul.
as always. :]]

'pretty-pictured frame.'
i love that phrase. ^

[contagious.]

thanks love.
(:

[angelaa.]

no problem, beebah.

[fletcher.]

Holy cottage cream cheese.
That is beyond amazing. I love it.

[contagious.]

thank youu.
(:

[ZacGal101]

wow. thats amazing!
you have some serious talent.
:]

[contagious.]

aw. thanks.
:]

[contagious.]

retrace my footsteps,
remember the kiss that held your lips ?
look for me in the pages,
it's all written on our faces.
the broken feeling of regret,
the secrets kept.
serious stares and
secret affairs,
i'm hanging off the edge,
lost and broken,
the words left unspokenn.

[marisasaurus]

thats deep.
i like it
bri, i love you,.
hahaha.
:]

[contagious.]

lmao.
i love youu too.
:]

[designer_skyline.]

new poem. (:

if i was falling, falling,
you wouldn't catch me, as i fell,
after i'd been, falling, falling,
i'd never really be free,
i'll never have my freedom,
because you never caught me.

[fletcher.]

Coolness like an icecube.
I love it. Tis well awesome.

[angelaa.]

really awesome.
:]

[jerrr.]

deeeep (:

[designer_skyline.]

Coolness like an icecube.
I love it.

'you wouldn't know cool even if i locked you in a freezer!'

aha, thanks. (:

really awesome.
:]

thankss. (:

deeeep (:

cheers. :)

[fletcher.]

'you wouldn't know cool even if i locked you in a freezer!'
aha, thanks. (:


Baha, I have no come back.
Your welcome.

[I_luffyouu]

awesome i love it

[contagious.]

strangle me with your words,
break me apart with your hands,
i'll never understand.
you'll drop me and let me fall,
you don't even have to try,
let the secrets fly.
my fingertips will trace your lips,
words left unsaid, kisses un-kissed.
i'll fall apart, wasting away.
the static will consume me,
your fingerprints left at the scene.

[fletcher.]

Amazing.

[falalala.]

that was really good. (:

[contagious.]

thanks.
:]

[fkkkyeahh.]

The little boy wonders why his dad acts the way he does,
And he wishes he knew who his dad really was.
For his dad takes his stress out on him,
Just minutes after his lips left the bottle’s rim.
The little boy cries in fear as his dad goes wild,
He wonders how someone could do this to a little child.
This wasn't the first time that this has happened,
He felt like his house was hell, a place he was trapped in.
The reason he didn’t tell anybody actually made a lot of sense,
He knew if he did, his dad would find out, and he’d face the consequence.
He had to hide the bruises from everyone at school the next day,
If he didn’t people would find out, and there would be a price to pay.
The little boy wanted it all to stop, but he didn’t know how,
He knew the end was coming soon. Sooner than soon, It was now.
The father didn’t know, that that night the little boy would die,
Not from disease, not from an accident, but by his father, who wouldn't even cry.

i entered that in a contest and got first (:
i posted the rough draft on here earlier..

[fkkkyeahh.]

bump.

[biznatch]

whoa thats a really good poem and congrats on winning

[Major_Zacoholic_401]

OMG!! that poem is awsome. Very deep and....wow.
(sorry, I'm a sucker for poetry!)
Do you write poetry often?

[let it reindeer.]

you're very talented :]

[LittleCurL_]

wow that's amazing
your really good

[skittles_]

haven't been on zef in a longgg time.
anywho.

idk.
my poetry sucks.
but bare with me.

[ps. if you find this on fanfiction.net, it's because i posted it there. i have an account over there and on fictionpress too. so yeah. lol]



i like comments. :)

-----------

near to my heart, dear to my heart
the fear of my heart lies flat
flat on the ground, with the earth in a mound
in a pile all sated and flat


a pile that covers a grave
that yesterday gaped at the sky
which emptied its fear in a vat
that pours itself out through my eyes


the fear of the heart lies flat-
in the gaping mouth of a grave
under a pile all sated and fat
in a whole i can't close or save-


six long feet down, my angel, my clown
how could i know where to start?
for it's red and it's morning and i knew the warnings
sings of a shattering heart
there goes my greatest fear....
and here i am, numb, struck sightless and dumb
by the shattering sounds in my ears.


-----------

[the genie]

oh wow.
that's very....just....powerful.
amazing.

i don't normally like rhyming poems.
a lot [not all] seem very forced.
but this flowed beautifully.

bravo.
i'd love to see more from you.

[skittles_]

gee. thanks.
that's real swell of ya.
the commenting i mean.
:]

i work hard on my poetry.
and even just ONE comment makes me feel good.
i have some other stuff i've written.
i might post it later.

[angelaa.]

that's really awesome.
i'm in lovee with it. :]

[skittles_]

thank you.
i'm going to go find another one.

my poems take a while to write.
and i'm working on one right now.

but i have a whole bunch that are done.
so yeah.


[ps. if anyone ever has any titles, feel free to share. i never know what to title them.]

[skittles_]

in a guy's pov, btw.
a guy criminal.
ooooh.

------------------------

they got a record on me down at the station,
and a cell i know pretty damn well.
you got a problem? i feel for you, babe
my problems are shot to hell


you wanna know me better?
that's cute. pass me that beer
you ever shut up about feelings, babe?
you trying to talk off my ear?


you love me? yeah, you better.
it's prob'ly the safest for you.
you hate me? well, that's all right, babe,
i got other stuff to do.


-------------------------

inspired by dallas winston.
yes, that dallas winston if you've read the book i'm talking about.

[the genie]

wow.
that sounds so like him.

amazingness.
loving it.

[fkkkyeahh.]

bump.

[ELISETARD]

thats like really goodd .
:]

[burningxup_.]

i loved the rough draft; and i love this one.
congraduations on your win!

[contagious.]

congrats.
:]

[contagious.]

love themm.

[betterintime.]

those are freaking amazing♥.

[aw.cutelilarchie_.]

I have no idea why I wrote it.
but does it sound suicidal to you guys?
cuz after re reading it, it sounded like it to me,
and then my friends also agree.
Comments?

Bleed...bleed with me my dear,
let it flow and wash away the fear
drops on the floor, smears on the door
hands shake with anticipation for more
red drops appear upon my cheeks
they roll and fall in single streaks
stains on the tile resemble a smile
shaky hands search for numbers to dial.
I'm crying, not for me, but you
with all this dreadful sorrow you can't undo
I'm blinded by red, it glows all around me
I can no longer see who i wanna be
sirens from above are piercing and loud
I listen to the panic, while buried under ground
the purness of silence echoes among the walls
I close my eyes, and darkness falls...
Don't bleed anymore my love,
i'm shining down on you from up above.

[Bekah]

All poetry threads merged. Again.

[efronator.]

^loll. Sorry, if this is causing trouble.

[Lola.OWNS.yu]

def sounds suicidal to me, kinda creeped me out

[I_luffyouu]

omg thats great

[Gabberz]

I dont have poenms,but i have songs!
does that count?

[skittles_]

[ps. this is ALL one poem. the +'s are just for effective division, i guess. 'cause i felt like it. lol]


i never loved nobody
the way i loved you
never
in my life have i
loved

+

once i had a horse who was
wild as a sunrise and i was only a little kid
i was only thirteen
but i got a taste of freedom for the first time
and i never even thought to look back

+

i would have looked back for you

+

i wasn't gonna put that there but it just came through
it just comes through and now i understand that
if it all came down to one last chance i would take that chance
with you

+

for you

+

because i can't sleep and i can't stand i am
writing this one last time
just one last time
to let you know what i'm thinking and that maybe this will be the one single damn letter
you finally open

+

i never loved nobody the way
i loved you
never

+

in all my life

[contagious.]

def sounds suicidal to me, kinda creeped me out
you're such a little bxxtch. (:
people take their time
to write these poems.
don't you have better things
to do than bash people's poetry ?

[the genie]

[ps. this is ALL one poem. the +'s are just for effective division, i guess. 'cause i felt like it. lol]


i never loved nobody
the way i loved you
never
in my life have i
loved

+

once i had a horse who was
wild as a sunrise and i was only a little kid
i was only thirteen
but i got a taste of freedom for the first time
and i never even thought to look back

+

i would have looked back for you

+

i wasn't gonna put that there but it just came through
it just comes through and now i understand that
if it all came down to one last chance i would take that chance
with you

+

for you

+

because i can't sleep and i can't stand i am
writing this one last time
just one last time
to let you know what i'm thinking and that maybe this will be the one single damn letter
you finally open

+

i never loved nobody the way
i loved you
never

+

in all my life


wowsers.
i love that so much.

[burningxup_.]

i have a new one. :]
butt it would involve me typing it up;
so i'll post it later.

[life in polaroids.]

The little boy hears his fathers foot steps,
outside the closet door;
he shivers in the deep corner,
waiting for his fate;
His dad opens the door,
and yanks the boy out of the closet,
and starts screaming at the poor thing;
the dad throws a punch,
hitting the boy's poor little eye;
what did he do to deserve this?

The boy lies, motionless on the floor;
as his dad marches upstairs,
claiming his victory over the little life.

((wow, that just came into my head, i have a bad mind! im so mean!))

[the genie]

blue crayon.
beautiful, simple.

johnny.
beautiful, simple.
his big sister's dead.
his mom's hacked off
again
hates him for nothing

broken shards of glass
from that beer bottle on that couch
is scattered across the floor

one hand swept through his hair,
johnny clearing the glass,
he cuts his finger.

there stood his dad.
filled with a drunked rage.
busted bottle in his left hand,
his eyes taunt johnnny.
they threaten and tease.

school came the next day.
looks of pity from others
it was no secret
there weren't many reasons why
an eight year old boy would dawn a blackened eyelid.

johnny ignores them
they don't know
he doesn't want their pity
he doesn't need their pity

they give him handouts,
smile and pretend to care
at only eight, johnny sees the false sincerity

why can't they save their goddamn pity for the starving kids in africa?
save it for them and leave him alone.
he wants nothing from them.

they talked about it.
they wrote poems about him.
they tried to help him.
he didn't like any of it.

did the fact they smiled and gave him cookies
make up for the fact his eye was black,
his mother hated him, his sister was dead,
and a pathetic bar was where his dad sat?

it didn't make up for it.
it could never make up for it.
he didn't want their help.

don't try to help him. please, he begs you.
he doesn't want your handouts,
your fake compassion is like tossing a penny to a begger,
it won't help him.
it'll just make him feel even more small.

don't even try and feel high and mighty
about helping someone who doesn't want your help
someone who doesn't need your help

even if he does.

school finishes.
taunting eyes, another busted bottle.
a broom stick in his mother's hand.
his sister's framed photo smashed on the floor.
tears stream.

red crayon.
destroyed, broken.

johnny.
destroyed, broken.

[contagious.]

i think we have an emergency ;
the way you look at me.
my heart'll stop, tick - tock goes the clock.
we're running out of time, i have to make you mine.
the air around us - suffocating, my heart breaking.
strangle me, i'll go happily, melancholy feelings.
listen close, don't leave me alone.
i just might break your heart, tear you apart.
i'll make you mine tonight ; and lose my mind.
i'll lose my mind, emergency, we're running out of time.

[ok go.]

i think we have an emergency ;
the way you look at me.
my heart'll stop, tick - tock goes the clock.
we're running out of time, i have to make you mine.
the air around us - suffocating, my heart breaking.
strangle me, i'll go happily, melancholy feelings.
listen close, don't leave me alone.
i just might break your heart, tear you apart.
i'll make you mine tonight ; and lose my mind.
i'll lose my mind, emergency, we're running out of time.


aww.
i love that onee. :]
very cute

[contagious.]

yayy.
thank you dear.
:]

[ok go.]

your welcomee. :]

[contagious.]

:]]

[efronator.]

Read between the lines,
of my heartbroken story,
just the one you broke,
never thought i would go back.
holding onto my waist,
forgot my heartache,
save me boy,
never let go,
so close the door,
and stick to me,
and wash away the red tears,
that i cried when you left,
and take me there,
once more.




just a little something i just wrote.

[contagious.]

whoa.
i love itt.

[designer_skyline.]

i feel like i've lost,
brokendown,
i'm a robot, malfunctioning,
never again will i answer your call,
it's north worth it,
you'll only break my heart, yet again.



i only just wrote that for this thread, aha,

dudeee, can i join? i write purdy deep poems.

[designer_skyline.]

find the closest thing to paper,
write it down on my hand,
the lyrics to our lost love song,
for now, have been found,
i bet you if gave them to you,
you'd only loose them again,
so that's why i don't trust you,
that's why i'm done with you men.

[efronator.]

the world spins; my heart aches;
because of your beautiful face;
im losing my pulse;
so kiss me again;
through the darkened door of my life;
rewind this love again;
the beat of your heart; stains my brain;
i love you;
so catch me with every fall i take.

[let it reindeer.]

your face.
embedded in her mind.
the way you walk
and talk. and stare.
she knows.
she has you memorized.
right down to last night.
the way you made her feel
she can't get that from anybody else.
why?
because it's the thrill of the pain.
you know.
her. the other her.
the one she sees you walking away with.
are you ever going to tell her?
no. you're not.
coward.
she packs her books, inside.
head down, whispers
"i wish you were mine"..

i just wrote that down about 5 seconds ago.
needs some touching up. haha.
(:

[efronator.]

the 911 call;
of my bursting heart;
blood dripping to the floor;
that my heart is overflowing;
you broke my heart;
and forever it will be broken;
so no saying sorry;
because its locked;
on someone else ;
besides you.

^^That was really good. i loved it.

[efronator.]

poetry bump!

[Gamer.]

There were so many poetry threads they all got merged. Lol.

[_devilschild]

i hate life,
i'll kill it with a knife.
cutting is fun,
try it son.

[contagious.]

haha,wow.

[efronator.]

^^wow? cool. sure

[sexkitten.]

i hate life,
i'll kill it with a knife.
cutting is fun,
try it son.
we'll try it when we feel
like committing suicide

[contagious.]

tonight i'll fall for you again ;
hands against the wall,
heavy breathing, chests heaving.
watch me fall apart right in front of your eyes,
leave the secrets behind and forget the lies.
stars fading, sick of waiting.
i'm making you mine, turn back time.

[efronator.]

you left me standing here alone; in the puddles of my tears.
just left me waiting for that special prince to break up with her unknown.
his heart is like a castle; holds love together;
and if that castle wasnt there;
the world would be blinded by love;
hearts painted black;
and love wouldnt exist;
through the tears that dont drip.


bri that was amazing!

[contagious.]

aww. i love it.

[efronator.]

^yours are betterr.
luv your siggy btw.

[contagious.]

thank you. :]

[efronator.]

Boreddddd.

Hush my angel; sing me that love song;
that you made for me the day you said i love you;
strum me those notes again and run your fingers through my hair;
showes the effection of both of us;
the love between us;
so sing me to Heaven;
where we can live happily.
and love each other deeply; with no heartbreak; once more.

[efronator.]

Boreddddd.

Hush my angel; sing me that love song;
that you made for me the day you said i love you;
strum me those notes again and run your fingers through my hair;
showes the effection of both of us;
the love between us;
so sing me to Heaven;
where we can live happily.
and love each other deeply; with no heartbreak; once more.

[contagious.]

wow. i love it.

[let it reindeer.]

breathless ;
you pull me in.
i am without fear
the kindest words
the sweetest sins
you whisper in my ear
if only this didn't end tonight
maybe the world could see
that me and you, you and i
we are meant to be.

(:

[let it reindeer.]

smiling ;
i melt inside
your fire is in me
my heart is pumping
blood rushing
i'm pouring it all out tonight.
take me in; one last breath.
this could be the one
all i know is right now, tonight
our journey's just begun.

[let it reindeer.]

the soundtrack of your life
plays over in my head
oh ; how could i forget?
those star-filled nights,
that endless summer
you and i weren't like any other.
did you feel it too ?

[let it reindeer.]

everyone's talking
they know.
are you aware?
they see your pain
they look in your eyes.
surprise.
don't hide it.
don't turn back.
don't mesh into their world of
conformity ; be you.
keep going.

haha. i'm so bored.

[let it reindeer.]

a small note that said
"where have you been?"
she looks away ;
hides her head in shame.
he loved her.
she loved him.
but what kept them together
tore her apart
she lay alone
wearing a bleeding heart.

[maxwell demon.]

cann i joinnn>?

[maxwell demon.]

i wrote this when i was lke 12; so it's really itshay, but it's an example anyway,


i'll push you away,
an eternity, once whole
has split; left us to ponder
why, not how
deep down, i suppose
there's still something worth
fighting for
but now, it's gone, and i feel
as though it's never coming back
but i still smile at our memories
holding hands, walking across that bridge,
that held so many of our laughs
through that smile, and sparkle in your eyes,
i thought you meant it when you said
you'd hold onto me forever.



hahahahahahah, ew it's all messed up.
i remember writing in math class. hehe :]

[maxwell demon.]

ok, um i wrote this today, it's really simple & pretty bad, but
it's basically the way i feel about a CERTAIN guy :]

when you're around the sun shines a little brighter
when you're around i feel a little warmer
you're the only one that can make my heart beat faster
and slower, at the same time
you're the only one who can make me laugh
and cry, at the same time
everything's a blur;
and all i notice is you

[efronator.]

sure^^ yeahh, ill add you.
awesome poems. theyre great.
ive been writing for a year.

[maxwell demon.]

thankss :]

[LEDGER.]

holy cow.
you guys put my writing to shame.
i'm scared to put mine up here.

[maxwell demon.]

you shouldd put it up :]
it's probs better than minee anywaay

[LEDGER.]

psh.
i doubt it.
i'll type it up laterr. (:

[aw.cutelilarchie_.]

what type do most of you write in?

[contagious.]

bring back the memories ;
old photographs and broken feelings.
they'll make me lose control,
forget the nights i spent with you,
staying up all night ; sleeping till noon.
rush of blood, we'll run out of time.
i've got to make you mine, tonight.
soft sighs in the midnight air ,
listening for the pulse, this isn't fair.

[aw.cutelilarchie_.]

Your real good Bri =)

[contagious.]

thanks.(:

[aw.cutelilarchie_.]

^Your welcome.


My broken wings they hold me down
they help me wear this weary frown
my hearts not broken, it's just alone
hidden beneath my color tone
deep inside it's black and blue
this pain inside is nothing new
my wings won't spread,
so bow your head
you hurt me with those words you said
don't you see what you have done?
I don't like the person you've become
just let me be
and soon you'll see
your the one who will be missing me.

[aw.cutelilarchie_.]

I'm drowning....
in the depths of the deepest seas
holding my breath for eternal life
deeper and deeper i sink
as i scurry through the tangled webs
I'm fighting the disease that wounds my soul
letting all I know float away.
dreaming beyond despair
raising my head to catch some air
tightening my grip on life
hoping to gain control
i begin to slip away, and let my body flow.

[deschanel love]

You guys are absolutely amazing.

What i want in a future boyfriend?
Its hard to say
i just want him to love me
love me the right way
not wanna change me at all
just keep me as me
because he knows that its
all i can be.
Our hands fit perfectly
like we were made to be as one
like we've been together
since the world begun

that one's the worst thing ive ever written.

[aw.cutelilarchie_.]

A young girl sits alone
she buries her face, so the tears aren't shown
her bones weaken with every tear,
and her breaths are shortened by the fear
the blood was drawn, the test complete
she knows it will be to hard to beat
her faith is fading, along with her life
the tension so think, you'll need a knife
time flies by with each passing tear
because she knows the end will soon be here.

[aw.cutelilarchie_.]

That's great!
I love the last part the most =)

[contagious.]

those are all amazingg.

[aw.cutelilarchie_.]

Thanks =)

[deschanel love]

Briiiiiiiiiiiii =]
long time no hehe.
You guys are seriously talented writers.

[aw.cutelilarchie_.]

Briiiiiiiiiiiii =]
long time no hehe.
You guys are seriously talented writers.

Thanks.
But your really good too (:

[deschanel love]

Aww thanks (: thats so sweet.
I wish i'd written more...do you guys mind if i repost
my 2 dark poems? cuz not many people read them when
i posted them before.

[contagious.]

he calls but i ignore the phone ;
with you, i'd like to be alone.
rain hits the roof, we're living proof.
i hang off of your kiss ,
covered in fingertips from my lips to hips.
we'll play it like a game, it's all the same.
i'll cover your mouth and kill off your thoughts ;
breaking your heart and tearing you apart.
we're alone now, let's make it quick.
we'll make this last ; take my love and never give it back.

[contagious.]

Briiiiiiiiiiiii =]
long time no hehe.
You guys are seriously talented writers.
hiii.(:

[deschanel love]

AMAZING BRI!
*bows down*

[contagious.]

haha, thank you. <3

[deschanel love]

No problemo hehe <3

[contagious.]

i'll make you scream ; cause a scene.
if you think i'll forget , all the secrets you've kept.
break the wall between us,
suffocating and mistaken.
drown me in your love ;
check all of the above.
pin my heart to the paper walls,
ignore the phone calls.
we're alone now,
your hands against mine,
we'll rewind time.

[contagious.]

bring us to our knees ;
watch him as he leaves.
what a heartbreaker ;
shameless chance taker.
close your mouth and
open your eyes,
watch the mistakes fly.
pictures of us hang on the wall ;
we'll drop and let go of it all.
pictures of us go up in flames,
put our love to shame.
we should have known,
left all alone.
blazing fire,
stay a while.

[1996star]

those r awsome I write em 2 I just don't post em really

[let it reindeer.]

pack up & walk out the door ;
take your things & put your hands
in your pockets ; there's nothing left
of today.
climb in to that dirtied up dodge
drive away.
there's nothing left to say.
i had my chance ;
let it slide
i just want one more second
to look in your eyes...


haha well you may think
that it is about breaking up...
but it is really about the boy of my
dreams walking out of english class
at the end of the school day.
& me being disappointed because
i didn't get the chance to talk to him.
haha. randomly just pulled that out of
nowhere.

[electric hearts.]

wow, you guys are great, i kinda just started.
one, i just kinda made up, not really a poem, is in my siggie.

[electric hearts.]

he told me he loved me.
but he was only lies.
my tear stained cheeks.
my broken heart.
his never ending love..
now shattered to pieces.
so hard to forget him,
my one true love.


^^that one.
tell me if you like it, or not.
thanks.

[electric hearts.]

i got another one, its ok.
i don't really know, like if these are good poems or not, so your feedback would be cool.
here it is:

its like nothing happened.
no one will know;
what he did..
was so low.
i'm hurt for life,
nothing will change it.
the memories, the pain...
how could he do this?
what will he gain?

[let it reindeer.]

they're great :]]

[electric hearts.]

thanks =]

[electric hearts.]

pack up & walk out the door ;
take your things & put your hands
in your pockets ; there's nothing left
of today.
climb in to that dirtied up dodge
drive away.
there's nothing left to say.
i had my chance ;
let it slide
i just want one more second
to look in your eyes...




haha, that one is really good though.
i really like it.
=]

[let it reindeer.]

why thank youu!!! :]]
haha i was thinking it today,
then i just wrote something down
randomlyy.
boys rock.. haha. :]]

[electric hearts.]

why thank youu!!! :]]
haha i was thinking it today,
then i just wrote something down
randomlyy.
boys rock.. haha. :]]


lol

[electric hearts.]

just wondering, what are most of your poems about?
like what do you most likely write about?

[electric hearts.]

her pulse beating
her head racing.
her eyes widen with fear,
as the first tear,
runs down her cheek.
she rips up what she thought was true.
what she thought she knew..

i just made that, but idk if i like it.
and idk what to put at the end.
lol

[let it reindeer.]

^^^that's good :]]

and idk.. most of my poems are like...
about love...and boys... haha.
i'm not really into the depressing breaking up stuff..
i mean i like reading it but not writing it..
but stuff like.. "i like this guy but he likes this girl".
haha, boys mostly. i love boys... i'm boy crazy.. haha.
& you're really good!! :]]]
what do you write about??

[electric hearts.]

^^^that's good :]]

and idk.. most of my poems are like...
about love...and boys... haha.
i'm not really into the depressing breaking up stuff..
i mean i like reading it but not writing it..
but stuff like.. "i like this guy but he likes this girl".
haha, boys mostly. i love boys... i'm boy crazy.. haha.
& you're really good!! :]]]
what do you write about??

thanks!
i like to write about, love, and boys and stuff, sorta break ups, like
he said he loved me, but it wasnt true.
stuff like that.
adn one poem i wrote, it was this one:

its like nothing happened
no one will know.
what he did...
was so low.
i'm hurt for life.
nothing will change it.
the memories, the pain...
how could he do this?
what will he gain?


that poem was sorta about like, abuse, i guess.
lol, not to sound like weird, but i guess i get my inspiration
from like sad stuff, and it just goes from there.

[angelaa.]

lmao, i'm embarrassed to post my poems here.
they're kinda strange. but i like writing them.

all of your poems are so awesome, guys.
i'm too lazy to quote all of them though. :]

[electric hearts.]

lmao, i'm embarrassed to post my poems here.
they're kinda strange. but i like writing them.

all of your poems are so awesome, guys.
i'm too lazy to quote all of them though. :]

haha.
hey! your the girl, with the siggie that i love, lol...wow..that was random.
ha
yea, you should posts your poems, no one will be mean and like..bash them or whatever.
=]

[contagious.]

1.thoughts swirl in my head ;
i think we've taken this too far.
i'll let you go again , praying
you'll stay in my arms.
hurt and pain ; not much to be afraid of.
you've made me strong, i have to do
this, even if it's wrong. so kiss me ;
cover me with your fingertips and make a scene.
kill my thoughts, and break my heart,
i hope you'll catch me when i fall ;
with open arms.




2.we'll run away ; lips lie and hips sway.
3:00 am, broken feelings put us to shame.
for now, i'll blame this on tonight,
a little bit of darkness in my light.
time's moving, together we're losing.
fall with me , set me free.


3 .the best thing tonight is that i'm with you,
throwing rocks at your window.
hold your breath and let me in;
intoxicated, i'll let you win.
they don't have to know ;
now we're alone.
press your hands against mine,
watch the clock waste time.

[electric hearts.]

1.thoughts swirl in my head ;
i think we've taken this too far.
i'll let you go again , praying
you'll stay in my arms.
hurt and pain ; not much to be afraid of.
you've made me strong, i have to do
this, even if it's wrong. so kiss me ;
cover me with your fingertips and make a scene.
kill my thoughts, and break my heart,
i hope you'll catch me when i fall ;
with open arms.




2.we'll run away ; lips lie and hips sway.
3:00 am, broken feelings put us to shame.
for now, i'll blame this on tonight,
a little bit of darkness in my light.
time's moving, together we're losing.
fall with me , set me free.


3 .the best thing tonight is that i'm with you,
throwing rocks at your window.
hold your breath and let me in;
intoxicated, i'll let you win.
they don't have to know ;
now we're alone.
press your hands against mine,
watch the clock waste time.


wow.
those are great!

[contagious.]

thanks. :]