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electric hearts.
08-19-2008, 12:57 PM
this is liz, btw, i changed my user :]
aw. i know how you feel,
but that poem was so good.
i really liked it.
deschanel love
08-19-2008, 01:03 PM
i love your new username :]
and aw thanks,i was randomly reminiscing and that line
about the stars is something a guy i was dating said to me when i was
13 hehe good ole times.
vegas.
08-19-2008, 01:06 PM
its not fair.
all of you guys are too good.
-sulks-
electric hearts.
08-19-2008, 01:14 PM
i love your new username :]
and aw thanks,i was randomly reminiscing and that line
about the stars is something a guy i was dating said to me when i was
13 hehe good ole times.
thanks,
haha, aw.
its not fair.
all of you guys are too good.
-sulks-
so are you,
your amazing at writing.
happytrail.
08-19-2008, 03:54 PM
you moved on, quicker
than i ever thought. just left
me standing here, crying in my
sleep. having dreams about you
makes me sick, i love you. but
you just ran over my heart, with
every kiss you give her, i'll love you
even more, and i'll stand alone, once
again. i never thought it would come to
this, one word sentences, not even one
simple word, just a smirk and you holding
her hand. why can't you just leave her?
freakshow.
08-19-2008, 04:26 PM
everyone is amazing.
<3.
poisonivys
08-19-2008, 04:29 PM
ok i'm going to give it a shot...
There's a time in ur life when
there's a gotta go momment
but u never will no. when there's a
star in the sky, grey in the clouds,
red in my heart,yellow in the sun
u know there's that momment
i wrote this when i was haveing a hard time at
school what do u think?
freakshow.
08-19-2008, 05:54 PM
^ i love it. <3
& i wrote what's in my sig.
<33ZacEfron
08-19-2008, 06:30 PM
Your name spoken aloud
Still brings a blush to my cheeks
In the hallways I catch glimpses of you
And I can't help but reminisce
Our bodies entangled, your hands about my waist
The softest of kisses that stilled my heart
And took my breath away
Teasing smiles, pointless arguments
We were two opposites that certainly attracted
Now you're gone, I haven't seen your face
For quite a long time and I cry
The pain I feel consumes me
I can't get you out of my mind
I won't let go, I'll keep holding on
Hoping that someday you'll notice me
And once again we'll be pulled together
And never leave each other's sides
afallfromgrace.
08-19-2008, 06:43 PM
you guys, please.
stop being. so derrrn. amazing.
(:
electric hearts.
08-19-2008, 07:18 PM
i'm taking steps back,
only for you to cut in.
i'm pulling myself down,
so that you can get higher.
i'll take myself away,
just so that you can have a place
in life. i just want to be noticed,
have you ever felt pain,
in order for one's happiness?
i feel like i'm withering away,
at the sound of your voice.
you've taken away every part of me.
ugh. not finished,
and it sucks. :/
maisie st. cloud
08-20-2008, 03:26 AM
as the noises blur around me
i go in a different world.
like you never seemed to care
you shared your love
with another girl
and now;
regrets start to flow
you want me to plead guilty
cause you know
it was you who broke my heart
and now i cant even imagine;
how you feel now.
deschanel love
08-20-2008, 06:23 AM
wow both of those are amazing.
happytrail.
08-20-2008, 08:56 AM
i'm left with words written in red,
nothing to say but i heard what
you said. nothing can make me
lose, that's what i thought, but
as you tear me into pieces, i
lie awake, in my darkness
of life, heaven's nowhere to be found,
because my dreams have been invaded
in the black, and i'm nothing but skin
without you.
afallfromgrace.
08-20-2008, 08:57 AM
thou shalt stop being such amazing writers.
huffah ! [:
sohappyIcouldDie
08-20-2008, 09:09 AM
It's so hard to say goodbye
even if i write down each word
i hate to see the tears in your eyes
and see the blood coming from your wrists
but i just can't hold on anymore
no matter how much it breaks my heart
i'm going down with the sunset
leaving no trace of love behind
move on with your life
don't hang on to my love
i'm not worth living for
so close your eyes as i drift away
just forget me.
happytrail.
08-20-2008, 09:54 AM
i wrote a song, for my best friend, and zac.
(:
You.
[verse 1]
i know i've cried so many tears in front of you,
there's so many times that you cried too.you
made me feel so true to myself, trying to idenify,
me myself and i. i don't know if i could live, standing
here alone.i need you to talk on my telephone you
protect me from all the danger in this crazy world, without
you, my head is in a whirl.
[chorus]
i know that you and i our lastin till the end,
holding so tightly, this friendship will never
end. i don't know what you feel, but i feel something
so unreal, you and me, we're so free, i couldn't ask for
a better person inside, that doesn't hide, but you. [you]
[verse 2]
we'll laugh all our fears away,
hopefully this remains the same.
all of us here together, now and
forever. i'll never let you go,
making me live life alone, i can't
forget about writing this song, for you.
[chorus]
[verse 3]
we could fight everyday our lives,
we'll all try to survive,all i know
is when you're impossible to find,
i fall fast, i wish you were here, with
me, i'll watch your back, making sure
someone doesn't break you so easily.
[chorus]
afallfromgrace.
08-20-2008, 09:58 AM
^ whoa.
maisie st. cloud
08-20-2008, 10:05 AM
everyone is fantabulous [:
electric hearts.
08-20-2008, 10:07 AM
my racing heart beat, is finally evening out.
i hear your voice, and all seems fine.
turn your back, i'll fall. look at me,
i'll shine. you made me what i am today,
having you, makes me one to love.
i fear what hasn't happened, yet the thought
of tomorrow, means nothing, without you.
your my invisible shield, never leave me,
because i need you. my destiny is only
up to me, yet you have such an impact.
leave me tonight, and i'll shatter. but what
i need, is to be strong; let me be.
ew.
happytrail.
08-20-2008, 10:08 AM
^ whoa.
is that bad? haha.
afallfromgrace.
08-20-2008, 10:10 AM
liz is awesomeful.
is that bad? haha.
lmfao. how did i know you were going to take it in a bad way ?
whoa as in. AMAZING whoa. :]
sohappyIcouldDie
08-20-2008, 10:10 AM
that was beautiful!!
i wrote a song, for my best friend, and zac.
(:
You.
[verse 1]
i know i've cried so many tears in front of you,
there's so many times that you cried too.you
made me feel so true to myself, trying to idenify,
me myself and i. i don't know if i could live, standing
here alone.i need you to talk on my telephone you
protect me from all the danger in this crazy world, without
you, my head is in a whirl.
[chorus]
i know that you and i our lastin till the end,
holding so tightly, this friendship will never
end. i don't know what you feel, but i feel something
so unreal, you and me, we're so free, i couldn't ask for
a better person inside, that doesn't hide, but you. [you]
[verse 2]
we'll laugh all our fears away,
hopefully this remains the same.
all of us here together, now and
forever. i'll never let you go,
making me live life alone, i can't
forget about writing this song, for you.
[chorus]
[verse 3]
we could fight everyday our lives,
we'll all try to survive,all i know
is when you're impossible to find,
i fall fast, i wish you were here, with
me, i'll watch your back, making sure
someone doesn't break you so easily.
[chorus]
electric hearts.
08-20-2008, 10:17 AM
i'm alone in this cold world,
i write my thoughts on crumpled paper,
and stare at the world, through empty eyes.
tear drops stain the paper thats filled
with my thoughts, i'm not letting them past
this barrier of my walls. i'm trapped between them,
trapped in myself, screaming to get out.
i'll rip myself apart, my thoughts that pull me down,
and threaten to ruin the life it owns,
how could i do this to myself? i'll keep myself tied
down to my own thoughts, til theres nothing
left to have.
ew. :/
sohappyIcouldDie
08-20-2008, 10:18 AM
i'm alone in this cold world,
i write my thoughts on crumpled paper,
and stare at the world, through empty eyes.
tear drops stain the paper thats filled
with my thoughts, i'm not letting them past
this barrier of my walls. i'm trapped between them,
trapped in myself, screaming to get out.
i'll rip myself apart, my thoughts that pull me down,
and threaten to ruin the life it owns,
how could i do this to myself? i'll keep myself tied
down to my own thoughts, til theres nothing
left to have.
ew. :/
wow..i love this one..beautiful :):o
electric hearts.
08-20-2008, 10:19 AM
thanks
happytrail.
08-20-2008, 10:25 AM
i can't belive it, me
crying right now. i can't
believe you, you with her
makes me cry everyday. i can't
stand it anymore, was she the
reason we never got together,
and you broke my heart? i don't
understand you or her, i can't control
you, i know. you went to far.
---------
whoa, i'm angry right noww.
i'm extremely angry, at zanessa.
gr. haha. (: this song is my favorite:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wyu_Xm3qDy8
my inspiration.
sohappyIcouldDie
08-20-2008, 10:48 AM
thanks
:) np
happytrail.
08-20-2008, 01:25 PM
nobody cares about me,
they just walk away. i understand
why, i don't have anything to say.
tore me up inside, nothing ever
feels the same, and i don't know,
if i could see your face again. get
me outta this place, run away with
me, find a better person to chace.
never forget me, and the good memories,
that we both had, with each other, holding
my hand, our love is unlike any other <3
afallfromgrace.
08-20-2008, 01:35 PM
rawr. sammie's amazingful. (:
electric hearts.
08-20-2008, 01:46 PM
i don't care what others think,
i'll keep pulling the petals from my flower,
until you tell me that you love me.
i'll take away all that i have,
and replace it with what you love.
i'll do anything for you,
just whisper those few words,
that make me melt. the liquid gold
voice you have, velvety smooth.
i just want to hear it, with the words,
i'm asking you for.
what must i do; for you to love me again?
ughh.
ew.
happytrail.
08-20-2008, 01:48 PM
^gahh, i love that.
and;; rawr, brit is amazingfull.
electric hearts.
08-20-2008, 01:48 PM
thankyouu sammie. :]
happytrail.
08-20-2008, 02:18 PM
^why, you're welcome.
electric hearts.
08-20-2008, 02:39 PM
take away this feeling, some call it love,
i call it pain, sometimes even fate.
i can hear it calling, in the distance,
its faint voice that i want to shut out.
love has hurt me more than hate ever could,
in a different way, love is something i wish for,
yet i wish for it to go away. love, something
so warm, yet can be the colder than the
worst of all winters. some say its better
than any, i contradict. i'd like to see
my love for you perish. gone, like the
days of my past, gone forever.
ugh.
i suckk.
<33ZacEfron
08-20-2008, 03:01 PM
^^ love it Liz
Here's my promise
I won't say goodbye
Like you did to me
Without warning you came and went
Leaving me alone in this desolate world
What more could I have asked for?
A hell of a lot more after all we had
I ended up with a broken heart
A crushed spirit and most of all
A tear stained pillow at night
How can you live with yourself?
Stuffed animals and candies
Won't be the way to winning me back
I'm amazed and angry that I still care
I should have up and left too
But no, I'm not like that
I'll sit here waiting for you
Until you finally realize
I've loved you all along
You can count on it
No worries, I always keep my promises
electric hearts.
08-20-2008, 03:02 PM
thank you.
and yours is amazing.
really, i love it.
deschanel love
08-20-2008, 03:07 PM
i swear this thread still takes my breath away
with all its amazingness :]]
happytrail.
08-20-2008, 03:07 PM
i'll throw all the red roses you
gave to me. the first time we
met, you hugged me and kissed
me on the cheek-
it was beautiful. but everything that
happened between us burnt into a
million pieces, i can't even find
words to explain it. all i know is
the song i wrote for you is gone;
all the memories wishin to come back,
but i'm not letting them flood my brain,
i don't want to forget you, but i have to.
<33ZacEfron
08-20-2008, 03:17 PM
thank you.
and yours is amazing.
really, i love it.
aww thanksss
<33
poisonivys
08-20-2008, 03:21 PM
When you broke up with me
i cryed u sang to me i cryed
everything you do to me i cry.
because i know are love will
not last forever
??
poisonivys
08-20-2008, 03:25 PM
i'm tired of wasting my life with you
tired of looking at you
seeing you there,talking to me
and trying to act like i love u
??
happytrail.
08-20-2008, 03:28 PM
those are really great. (:
i'm feeling so terrible, this is just
a dream. but he promised, he said
he would do this. he never breaks anything,
he's an angel in my world. i would never let
him bring me down, but he just left without
a sound. it's so depressing so see him leave,
saying he would come talk to me again, but
he didn't. he just left.
poisonivys
08-20-2008, 03:41 PM
Thank u
i like that one
happytrail.
08-20-2008, 03:41 PM
^why thank you.
<33ZacEfron
08-20-2008, 07:10 PM
I've mastered the art
Of losing myself
I can't fight the thoughts
Of you anymore
You consume me
Without even trying
I've stumbled around
Avoiding my true feelings
But when it comes down to it
I still love you
happytrail.
08-21-2008, 09:18 AM
^ (: love it.
the new flame you have with her;
it burns my heart to the color
of black. the pieces stuck to my skin;
me and you should be combined, this is
where the fighting begins. i want to getaway
from this ugly place, never come back again.
the blood in my veins, pours out because
of the heartbreak i can't take in anymore,
keeps on bleeding, can't control it anymore,
i'll lie on the floor, my lifeless body trying to
get back to the time before, there's nothing
i can do anymore.
<3
vegas.
08-21-2008, 09:25 AM
dancing in the darkness
beats pounding through
i breathe the music
this is it; this is home
under the neon lights,
in the mass of bodies
i've never belonged anywhere else
but here i fit, as i move and sway
if i had my way, this night
would never end
i'd live it every day and every night
for an eternity.
the feeling provides me safety.
thats all i can ask for.
erm. eww.
electric hearts.
08-21-2008, 09:55 AM
i love it sophie,
its not ew.
electric hearts.
08-21-2008, 10:01 AM
how come its getting harder to breathe,
and harder to see? its getting darker,
yet i'm not frightened. keep it coming,
because i feel so in the dark, without the
lights being turned out. i'm gasping for my
air now, you've constricted my lungs,
i'm confused and alone, except for you
too tight grasp on me. let go, i'll collapse
in the darkness, none shall find out.
ugh, ew.
vegas.
08-21-2008, 12:07 PM
yeah, so not ew.
amazing, as usual.
you're too good liz.
layna.xo
08-21-2008, 12:10 PM
wow, that was amazing. i officially love this thread
electric hearts.
08-21-2008, 12:20 PM
thanks :]
<33ZacEfron
08-22-2008, 09:46 AM
The distance and gaps between us grow
With every passing day
The blue skies fade and melt away
Trails of unhappiness are left to blow
Scattered pieces of the heart
Hide the sunlight amidst
The hoarding pools of gray that persist
Smiles and well wishes willingly depart
Lost amongst the raging storm
Animosity is bred
Ignorance to the tears that are shed
Place us both on opposing platforms
Heated glances that tear right through
Thunderbolts and lightning shot from eyes
We're slowly severing our tangled ties
We're enemies now; theres nothing left to construe
afallfromgrace.
08-22-2008, 10:33 AM
wow. everything's amazing.
screaming through aisles in our layered maze
with a raspy voice, taking a deep breath to
calm my rapid pulse that's weakening all other
noise. i've been drowning in this tide for you
too long, breathing in your words even though
i knew it was wrong. i'm feeling every lyric spiral
my veins, and i know that taste of salt on your lips
trying to numb the pain. for such time, i haven't breathed
in the fresh air, for my heart has been taking in
every rip and tear. i'm waking up to your voice
becoming a vague static, and watching your
eyes darkening with deep erratic. our flame has
blown out from our intense winds, and the deepened
nights soaking in our sins. the dark's getting closer
and the sky is closing in, but i can't understand why
this room is starting to spin. these windows fogged
with no way to see out, i need to learn to speak my
voice and learn what it's about.
gag. i hate it.
maisie st. cloud
08-22-2008, 12:18 PM
the light becomes darker;
sinking me back into where i am,
and where i'm suposed to be.
i feel like everything is lightening
when everything darkens
pressure of the lonliness
no words spoken;
not a whisper
cause i have only my prescence to be with me
cause you left me laying;
flat on my face.
deschanel love
08-23-2008, 04:43 PM
i love that maisie :]
i wrote something but its in pig latin cause im proud that its strangely
become my second language lol i dont think anybody will be able to understand
it so if you want the english translation just lemme know (:
Ayda fteraa ayda e’rewa yingda ota ivela
Ayda fteraa ayda e’rewa ivingla ota ieda
Veryea reathba akenta sia neoa essla ota aketa
Veryea entalma mageia toredsa ifferentda hanta heta extna
Veryea earta allenfa sia neoa essla ota ryca
Veryea isska ifferentda hanta heta extna
Achea mbraceea reatingca aa ifferentda eactionra veryea imeta
Verydayea ewna ndaa ullfa foa ewna onderwa
Ullfa foa romisepa ndaa pportunityoa
Urtha ndaa isappointmentda
Ovela ndaa ovela adema
Ossla, chesaa ndaa eartbreakha
Llaa heseta hingsta efineda howa ouya reaa
Heyta uildba ouya pua roa reakba ouya ownda
Akema ouya aughla ndaa milesa
Roa ryca nda rownfa
Heta iniestta foa hingsta anca akema ourya ayda
Roa anca rushca ouya ikela aa onta foa ricksba roa hattersa ourya eartha ntoia aa illionma iecespa
Ouya anca ndea pua noa heta loorfa aa rokenba leedingba odyba roa heta uckyla nesoa allfa sleepaa rappedwa nia heta rmsaa foa heta neoa heyta ovela
Xperienceea verythingea veryea motionea ossiblepa fia tia elpsha ouya noa ourya oadra ota elfsa iscoveryda
Osa awlba henwa eededna, aughla ilta ourya idessa chea ndaa ovela ikela ou’veya everna eenba urtha eforeba
Ifela sia aa eautifulba hingta, oota reciouspa oota astewa
Osa ivega verythingea aa hotsa ndaa akema ourya ifela emorablema
Auseca ememberra umansha nlikeua atsca ontda etga inena ivesla
Ou’veya otga neoa hanceca osa ontda astewa tia.
freakshow.
08-23-2008, 06:51 PM
i wrote these poems on your arms,
and i poured this posion in your veins.
maybe i'll choke on these words
that fly from my mouth. the words
i speak are "i love you." and these
words will enter through your pores
and into your heart. and they'll stay
there, begging to be proved.
i'll hold your hand, and i'll
prove this love.
<33ZacEfron
08-23-2008, 06:59 PM
^^ So I finally deciphered the pig latin...and well...I loved it =]
electric hearts.
08-24-2008, 07:56 AM
i love that maisie :]
i wrote something but its in pig latin cause im proud that its strangely
become my second language lol i dont think anybody will be able to understand
it so if you want the english translation just lemme know (:
Ayda fteraa ayda e’rewa yingda ota ivela
Ayda fteraa ayda e’rewa ivingla ota ieda
Veryea reathba akenta sia neoa essla ota aketa
Veryea entalma mageia toredsa ifferentda hanta heta extna
Veryea earta allenfa sia neoa essla ota ryca
Veryea isska ifferentda hanta heta extna
Achea mbraceea reatingca aa ifferentda eactionra veryea imeta
Verydayea ewna ndaa ullfa foa ewna onderwa
Ullfa foa romisepa ndaa pportunityoa
Urtha ndaa isappointmentda
Ovela ndaa ovela adema
Ossla, chesaa ndaa eartbreakha
Llaa heseta hingsta efineda howa ouya reaa
Heyta uildba ouya pua roa reakba ouya ownda
Akema ouya aughla ndaa milesa
Roa ryca nda rownfa
Heta iniestta foa hingsta anca akema ourya ayda
Roa anca rushca ouya ikela aa onta foa ricksba roa hattersa ourya eartha ntoia aa illionma iecespa
Ouya anca ndea pua noa heta loorfa aa rokenba leedingba odyba roa heta uckyla nesoa allfa sleepaa rappedwa nia heta rmsaa foa heta neoa heyta ovela
Xperienceea verythingea veryea motionea ossiblepa fia tia elpsha ouya noa ourya oadra ota elfsa iscoveryda
Osa awlba henwa eededna, aughla ilta ourya idessa chea ndaa ovela ikela ou’veya everna eenba urtha eforeba
Ifela sia aa eautifulba hingta, oota reciouspa oota astewa
Osa ivega verythingea aa hotsa ndaa akema ourya ifela emorablema
Auseca ememberra umansha nlikeua atsca ontda etga inena ivesla
Ou’veya otga neoa hanceca osa ontda astewa tia.
i'd like the translationn :]
i wrote these poems on your arms,
and i poured this posion in your veins.
maybe i'll choke on these words
that fly from my mouth. the words
i speak are "i love you." and these
words will enter through your pores
and into your heart. and they'll stay
there, begging to be proved.
i'll hold your hand, and i'll
prove this love.
i love thiss.
happytrail.
08-24-2008, 10:02 AM
well, yesterday i was coming home from up north,
and i had zac on my mind the whole time. i was thinking
what i would do without him, and how hard it would be
to let him go and see him fall or something. i was thinking
if he died, what would i do? i would be a total mess, so i wrote
this for him.
dying.
[verse 1]
i feel so ashamed of myself;
feeling like i did this to you,
i know that my feelings inside,
will never feel so true. i knew
that you would fade away, but
not today.you just left me crying
here, not knowing what to say,
anymore. i just think that you and i,
would never ever get this far, it feels
so light and i don't know if i could fly,
i wanna be your shooitng star. but all
the things in our way, it's just to much
to even think, about you leaving me.
[chorus]
i'll cry tonight here when you're not here,
i'll be alone trying to end my fears, not
knowing how. and all i can do is hope
and dream, without you standing next
to me, everything such a blur, don't
know what happend to you and her, but
all i know is that you're gone, and i know
that me being a mess, my heart inside my
chest is dying, and i can't get over you.
[verse 2]
even though you're gone,
you soul is still within my blood,
i can't get enough. i know that you
tried your best, to stay here with me,
not be laid to rest. i'll go to your grave,
and pray all day, and then give you rose,
so i know that there's a way, that i can live,
with you. [oh]
[chorus]
[verse 3]
here come the tears again,
not anybody to help me through this,
they don't understand a thing. all i can
do is rely on me. nobody can hold me tight,
nobody can help me through life, like you did.
you pushed me through the bad times, you helped
me through the good, and now i don't have anybody
that had me understood. all i know, is that you're safe,
in a better place, i can't let you go.
[chorus]
-----
i officialy have tears in my eyes right
now from writing this.
FRANKENTEEN.
08-24-2008, 10:03 AM
wow, i've missed so much.
i need to get back into writing poems.
but i loved them!
happytrail.
08-24-2008, 10:06 AM
^yes, you do. <3
deschanel love
08-24-2008, 12:22 PM
i thought the translation might be needed hehe :]
Day after day we're dying to live
Day after day we're living to die
Every breath taken is one less to take
Every mental image stored different than the next
Every tear fallen is one less to cry
Every kiss different than the next
Each embrace creating a different reaction every time
Everyday new and full of new wonder
Full of promise and opportunity
Hurt and disappointment
Love and made love
Loss, aches and heartbreak
All these things define who you are
They build you up or break you down
Make you laugh and smile
Or cry and frown
The tiniest of things can make your day
Or can crush you like a ton of bricks or shatter your heart into a million pieces
You can end up on the floor a broken bleeding body or the lucky ones fall asleep wrapped in the arms of the one they love
Experience everything every emotion possible if it helps you on your road to self discovery
So bawl when needed, laugh til your sides ache and love like you've never been hurt before
Life is a beautiful thing, too precious to waste
So give everything a shot and make your life memorable
Cause remember humans unlike cats dont get nine lives
You've got one chance so dont waste it
electric hearts.
08-24-2008, 02:18 PM
i thought the translation might be needed hehe :]
Day after day we're dying to live
Day after day we're living to die
Every breath taken is one less to take
Every mental image stored different than the next
Every tear fallen is one less to cry
Every kiss different than the next
Each embrace creating a different reaction every time
Everyday new and full of new wonder
Full of promise and opportunity
Hurt and disappointment
Love and made love
Loss, aches and heartbreak
All these things define who you are
They build you up or break you down
Make you laugh and smile
Or cry and frown
The tiniest of things can make your day
Or can crush you like a ton of bricks or shatter your heart into a million pieces
You can end up on the floor a broken bleeding body or the lucky ones fall asleep wrapped in the arms of the one they love
Experience everything every emotion possible if it helps you on your road to self discovery
So bawl when needed, laugh til your sides ache and love like you've never been hurt before
Life is a beautiful thing, too precious to waste
So give everything a shot and make your life memorable
Cause remember humans unlike cats dont get nine lives
You've got one chance so dont waste it
i love this.
deschanel love
08-24-2008, 02:34 PM
aww thank you so much :]
electric hearts.
08-24-2008, 05:22 PM
i'm falling, and i'm not sure if i want you to catch me.
my breathing slows, and i don't want you to revive me.
you could save me in so many ways,
but i'm not letting you near my fragile heart again.
with the snap of your fingers, i was shattered,
and i'm still trying to stitch myself up again,
but i'm not sure it'll stay. i'm trying to hold myself together,
i'm trying not to cry. picturing you only makes it
that much harder. breathing, only makes me want it
to end even more, the hold you still have on me.
i just want you to let go, but the problem is; you have,
and i haven't. my grip will soon loosen,
and i'll be out of this torture, seeing you, makes me want
to cry, makes me want to scream. make me let go.
ugh. :/ ew.
afallfromgrace.
08-24-2008, 05:43 PM
gawd. you guys are so amazing. (:
happytrail.
08-25-2008, 09:31 AM
i wish you were here with me,
so you could see all my dreams,
feeling all of your energy, i don't know
where to find you. but all i can do is try
to look around, pick up the pieces that
you dropped, replace them with my heart,
and you dropped that, easier than what you
did, i never thought that i would have this heart
attack. and all i'm doing is dreaming, wishing for
you, hoping the shooting star reaches for california,
so you can see it too. and you'll wish upon that star,
as the light falls down on all the fast cars, racing through
your mind, my wish tonight is for us to be together,
as one.
maisie st. cloud
08-25-2008, 09:41 AM
i love all of your poems.
your all so creative.
(:
electric hearts.
08-25-2008, 10:28 AM
just leave me again, take my heart with you.
i'm already shattered, already torn.
i'm nothing without you, so i encourage
you to go farther. what else do i need?
i'll take this oxygen, but i won't use it.
tears are the only thing that stain my life,
and the eyes i look through, can't see any farther
than pain itself. what do i have to live for,
when your not here?
ugh.
unfinished. :/
happytrail.
08-25-2008, 10:40 AM
^ugh. beautiful? haha.
that red rose, laying on my bedside,
saying i miss you, with the little piece
of paper with a heart across the page.
you care, or do you? cry;; i know that's
what you want to do, but how did you get
here? you walked into my life, without another
tear going down my face, because you left.
and know, you're crawling under my skin, trying
to get me back, but i won't let you dig any deeper,
these flowers are nothing, this piece of paper is
just another thing to put away in my drawers,
wishing that these memories wouldn't make me
hate you. <3
deschanel love
08-25-2008, 10:43 AM
both amazing as always :]
vegas.
08-25-2008, 11:59 AM
you always underestimate me
and i don't know what i can do
to prove to you there's more to me
than just what's on the surface
its people like you that make me believe
that i'll never be good enough for anyone
and especially not you and i know that
i'm good enough; i know i can achieve
all that i want. but when everyone
expects you not to, why bother to
prove them wrong. its easier to fail,
allow them to mock you. i guess
i can live a lifetime of "i told you so"s
electric hearts.
08-25-2008, 12:00 PM
amazing, sophie. :]
happytrail.
08-25-2008, 12:10 PM
all we can be.
[verse one]
all the possibilites,
of you and me, together.
flying faster than any thing in
the sky. i know that it's so hard
to hold on, i wanna let go but if
i do i'd probably cry. just, hold
me now, while we have the time,
becasue in a blink of an eye, we'll
fade away, but i hope not today.
[chorus]
we are gonna, happen
no matter what. we'll fly away
from all the mistakes,we've made.
just kiss me under the moonlight,
tell me that it will be alright, never felt
this way before, i wish we were something
more, but all we can be, is a dream.
[verse two.]
all the things that you say, to
everybody's face, makes you an
angel fallen from heaven. you've never
said a bad thing, you just sit there strumming
your guitar, i hope this song takes us a so far.
when i'm sleeping all i see is you, you're hauting
all my dreams, but everyday that i sleep, it gets
better or it seems, that way.
[chorus.]
[verse three.]
even though tonight is just a dream,
another one of those crazy things, that
make us think all about life. i know that
we'll meet someday, when we're on a journey,
finding our way, along. we'll find each other,
happily, hug each other, hopefully, never let
go, to me.
[chorus.]
afallfromgrace.
08-25-2008, 02:06 PM
A. MAZE. INGG.
all of them. (:
electric hearts.
08-25-2008, 02:11 PM
is this the end?
my paths' run out,
so your leaving me here?
i'm not sure if i could
keep going, jump over this
river, which is trying to drown me.
i can't get to the other side,
you're the only one who could
help me. i'll stay here as long
as i want, i'll never get to you.
can i turn around? or have you
taken that from me too? this path
is starting to thin out, and i'm
starting to shake, where
else can i go, when all else is
at its fate...?
ew.
<33ZacEfron
08-25-2008, 04:18 PM
I'm hanging onto this moment
I won't let the sun set on this beautiful night
I know we're slowly slipping away
And our memories are blurring, creeping out of sight
When I finally wake from this gray coloured dream
I'll reach out for you awaiting your embrace
And deep down I know you won't be there for me
But can't I just live in the moment and chase
These fantasies of us together
Living happily ever after
The hugs, the kisses
The screams and shouts of laughter
Stay with me tonight
I don't want this to end
I'm always going to love you
Why do you pretend
You say "It's better this way"
When I know it's not
"You'll move on someday"
When the truth is I cannot
You've always had my heart
So hold me tight for one last time today
And if you think that we're not right
Well, I won't be the one to say
"Goodbye"
electric hearts.
08-25-2008, 04:19 PM
I'm hanging onto this moment
I won't let the sun set on this beautiful night
I know we're slowly slipping away
And our memories are blurring, creeping out of sight
When I finally wake from this gray coloured dream
I'll reach out for you awaiting your embrace
And deep down I know you won't be there for me
But can't I just live in the moment and chase
These fantasies of us together
Living happily ever after
The hugs, the kisses
The screams and shouts of laughter
Stay with me tonight
I don't want this to end
I'm always going to love you
Why do you pretend
You say "It's better this way"
When I know it's not
"You'll move on someday"
When the truth is I cannot
You've always had my heart
So hold me tight for one last time today
And if you think that we're not right
Well, I won't be the one to say
"Goodbye"
arghhh, katrina.
why do you have to be so amazing?
<33ZacEfron
08-25-2008, 04:28 PM
arghhh, katrina.
why do you have to be so amazing?
lol aww thanks
I don't think it was thaaat good.
I love your writing!!
electric hearts.
08-25-2008, 04:31 PM
i liked it alot.
and thanks :]
alyssa leigh.
08-26-2008, 06:36 AM
hm. i wrote a poem last night. eh.
do you feel the way i feel?
or am i alone?
i try to get you out of my head but
you don't seem to want to leave.
can you forget about me?
i think it would be easier if you gave up first,
then i wouldn't be hanging onto you.
i tell you i can't keep you out of my mind.
you just turn and walk away.
am i that easy to turn down?
that's not what you said before.
if i recall, you said you loved me.
you told me i was your life.
your one and only.
i wish we could go back to the days
when we were young and... carefree.
i say we turn back time and
go back to when we were together.
don't say that you love me now.
love isn't just a four-letter word;
you can't just throw it around.
if you really meant you love me,
wouldn't you be here with me now?
that's what i'd like to think.
maybe someday you'll come back to me.
we can be together again.
i wish you felt the way i do.
i wish i wasn't alone.
happytrail.
08-26-2008, 10:25 AM
^ that was truely amazing.
all this energy,
reminds me of all the chemistry,
that i wish that we had. i've never
even seen a boy like you, you're
so beautiful. every word you say,
makes my heart melt into my body,
all the blood perfectly in place, running
away from me.
freakshow.
08-26-2008, 10:47 AM
the friction of hips &
the taste of lipstick.
he'll never forget her,
the night he lost his mind.
to write these love letters
on her thighs and whisper
in her ear, just might
make her believe.
the blood runs cold and
tonight will be a night
they'll both remember.
happytrail.
08-26-2008, 11:01 AM
^ oh my god.
that's like one of the best you've ever written.
freakshow.
08-26-2008, 12:17 PM
haha thanks !
<3
vegas.
08-26-2008, 12:31 PM
i'm nothing special
i'll tell you over and over
until your gaze drifts
to somebody new
because you finally realise
that i was right
i really am nothing special
and you've always been too good
i'll be alright though
you just let your gaze wander
find some other girl
maybe you can repeat history,
and make her think that
she's something to you.
happytrail.
08-27-2008, 07:07 AM
this pain is so real,
your presence is still here.
you're still here, i know it.
you can't be gone, i loved you.
but you shattered my heart,
and yours too, you're lying on the floor,
where everybody left you, i cried so hard,
i tried telling myself you're gone, but you're
still with me. you hold onto my sanity. but i've
been alone, for awhile now. the blood dripping down
you're skin, i don't know how to explain this.
happytrail.
08-27-2008, 07:34 AM
we'll find love, someday. i believe we
will. a shooting star may land. but you
might not see it. people find each other
every day. i guess it's just luck. like that
shooting star that lands on that one person,
gives them the strength and power to love
somebody. i don't have that power, i'm a
weakness to myself. i can't understand the
world. not when you're so far away from me.
it takes all of my energy just to say simple
things, to explain my feelings, to say i love you.
vegas.
08-28-2008, 10:44 AM
the sun sets in the distance
and here we are, going down with it
we're all fundamentally flawed
it's us - society - that brings about ruin
there's nothing we can do to stop it
so you ruin me, i'll ruin you in turn
and as the sun rises on a new day
we'll stay down amongst the rubble
of today's fractured and broken civilisation
maisie st. cloud
08-28-2008, 10:54 AM
the streaky glass
makes me stand
here and make me
realize
that i'm reliving this pain;
every glance every word every smile
you wrote in this letter
is making me die
of all the painful memories
makes me want to rip
out the pages of my heart.
cause you wrote all my feelings on this page
right there;
is a blood stain
where you ripped my heart open.
electric hearts.
08-28-2008, 07:51 PM
i've never felt such a burning feeling,
it was welling in my chest,
aching to get out. i want to let it out,
scream and shout. i can't take this pressure;
the truth has ripped through me,
and its tearing everything apart in its path,
i have no control, and i can't pull it back.
the words that are coming out, i can never take back.
i regret what i said, i regret what i felt.
feelings all too strong, caught in the moment.
but i'm done. i have nothing else,
take it all, i'm already torn, take what's left.
i'm starting to think that this will be my last poem.
i don't think i could ever write again.
vegas.
08-29-2008, 03:32 AM
what what what?
no no no.
that's amazing.
and you shouldn't stop.
happytrail.
08-29-2008, 07:17 AM
^^ that was beautiful. amazing.
pure feeling. loved it.
electric hearts.
08-29-2008, 07:31 AM
what what what?
no no no.
that's amazing.
and you shouldn't stop.
i kinda want too. i'm seriously starting to realize stuff now. and what i write is crap.
so...yeah.
happytrail.
08-29-2008, 07:32 AM
^NO IT'S NOT.
you have beautiful writings.
electric hearts.
08-29-2008, 07:36 AM
no, not really. because i've had times where people take what i write, and twist it into stuff, its happened to me twice, and i really don't want this to happen again, so if i write again, then it will only be sometimes. but i'm staying in the thread, to comment. because what you guys write is amazing.
happytrail.
08-29-2008, 07:56 AM
^aw. i'm sorry. but you should keep writing.
the pictures hanging on the wall,
the phone-not ringing anymore. everything
lost, the soul, the heart in this room.my life
has turned into madness, nothing i can control.
breaking your heart, turning me into a total mess,
is what everybody does best. my love for you was
so strong, and now you're just gone.i wish you would
open my door, and hold me. just like you did back in
the days, when we were in love. but that's history,
and the love story ended, the closed doors are staying
closed.
vegas.
08-29-2008, 08:02 AM
no, not really. because i've had times where people take what i write, and twist it into stuff, its happened to me twice, and i really don't want this to happen again, so if i write again, then it will only be sometimes. but i'm staying in the thread, to comment. because what you guys write is amazing.
:/
aww okay.
but what you write is really good, like amazingly so, just so you know.
and at least you're going to stay in the thread. : )
electric hearts.
08-29-2008, 08:06 AM
yeah. i'm definitely staying in the thread.
and that was really good, sammie. :]
happytrail.
08-29-2008, 08:08 AM
why thank you (:
happytrail.
08-29-2008, 11:41 AM
love, the definition of heartbreak. nothing
can stop it, but you can break it. and when
the hearts shatter, and you get crushed, you
fall. you never get back up. you stay there, until
he comes along. then you come back to life, and you
believe in love at first sight. such a beautiful thing, i hope.
you'll cry into his shirt, and he'll cuddle you. he'll kiss you
in the rain, and he'll give you his sweatshirt when you're cold.
but he would never let you go. he'll stay there forever, in that
space, as long as you believe, hope, dream in love at first
sight.
freakshow.
08-31-2008, 12:15 PM
i think that sometimes, giving up is the best choice.
not giving up on someone, in particular.
but we all have to learn from our mistakes.
we could have all the chances in the world,
and something could come along and
swipe them away.
like young love, with all it's chances.
chances to die. chances to blossom
like a spring rose. sometimes,
i believe that maybe we were all
put here on this earth to
do something. like, a purpose.
we're all worth something.
the colors in our eyes
reflect the people we
are inside, and the way we act.
and after you read this,
i hope you realize how special
you are to the people who love
you. and people who you don't
even know, want to take chances
with you. friends, lovers. anything.
there's a bond between humans
and love, and it can die or live.
you could bury your love in
a quiet grave, or give it sunshine
and ask it to live.
but, in the end, there's always
someone there.
who wants you.
crash&&burn.
08-31-2008, 12:18 PM
The distance and gaps between us grow
With every passing day
The blue skies fade and melt away
Trails of unhappiness are left to blow
Scattered pieces of the heart
Hide the sunlight amidst
The hoarding pools of gray that persist
Smiles and well wishes willingly depart
Lost amongst the raging storm
Animosity is bred
Ignorance to the tears that are shed
Place us both on opposing platforms
Heated glances that tear right through
Thunderbolts and lightning shot from eyes
We're slowly severing our tangled ties
We're enemies now; theres nothing left to construe
wow. that's beautiful.
crash&&burn.
08-31-2008, 12:19 PM
is this the end?
my paths' run out,
so your leaving me here?
i'm not sure if i could
keep going, jump over this
river, which is trying to drown me.
i can't get to the other side,
you're the only one who could
help me. i'll stay here as long
as i want, i'll never get to you.
can i turn around? or have you
taken that from me too? this path
is starting to thin out, and i'm
starting to shake, where
else can i go, when all else is
at its fate...?
ew.
liz... you think that's bad?
that's really good. (:
freakshow.
08-31-2008, 12:20 PM
you'll try to make me hate you.
and that's not going to happen,
so just give up. because when
the skies turn gray, and the
rain begins to fall onto my cheeks
and blend with my tears, i'll
be with you. in your arms.
i'll trust you with this heart,
as it lies in your palm.
it'll pump slowly, as your lips
touch mine, and the rain
begins to fall. it'll turn
the lightning into passion,
and the thunder into love.
lonelynights.
08-31-2008, 12:26 PM
I would jump off a bridge for you
Go wherever you want to
Get rid of every girl everyplace
So you can focus on my face
Love me always, be so true
So I can live peacefully with you
She wont ever get in the way
She wont ruin the way we sway
You can always give your equal part
And I will give you my heart
So just give me your love to hold
And our relationship will be solid gold
first time writing something. =/ i dont really like it...
story left untold.
08-31-2008, 12:35 PM
dude i loved that^
<33ZacEfron
08-31-2008, 01:19 PM
wow. that's beautiful.
Thank you =]
lonelynights.
08-31-2008, 01:20 PM
dude i loved that^
thank youu. ;]
electric hearts.
08-31-2008, 06:37 PM
liz... you think that's bad?
that's really good. (:
thanks.
but i don't really write anymore.
lonelynights.
08-31-2008, 06:48 PM
We could be friends
High in a tree house
We could be friends
And never forget
Each other’s phone numbers
Or colour of eyes
The path to your house
Or the way to say ‘bye’
With a smile and a clap
A wink and a foot tap
Like the best of friends
We shared our ice cream
Like the best of friends
We stared at the stars
We had walkie talkies
And hid under covers
A flash light in hand
We’d watch the moon hover
High in the sky
So far away
We’d stay up all night
And sleep in all day
But relationships change
And we grew apart
You were untouchable
Like a cold piece of art.
I thought you’d forgotten
I thought you’d moved on
I didn’t fit in
I felt I was wrong
And then came the day
That my eyes came alight
You took me aside
You smiled so bright
And told me you loved me
That nothing else felt right.
I grabbed your hand
We went for a walk
And like best friends in a tree house
We didn’t need to talk.
i wrote this like last week for school. what do you guys think? sorry its so long. ;]
maisie st. cloud
09-01-2008, 05:44 AM
We could be friends
High in a tree house
We could be friends
And never forget
Each other’s phone numbers
Or colour of eyes
The path to your house
Or the way to say ‘bye’
With a smile and a clap
A wink and a foot tap
Like the best of friends
We shared our ice cream
Like the best of friends
We stared at the stars
We had walkie talkies
And hid under covers
A flash light in hand
We’d watch the moon hover
High in the sky
So far away
We’d stay up all night
And sleep in all day
But relationships change
And we grew apart
You were untouchable
Like a cold piece of art.
I thought you’d forgotten
I thought you’d moved on
I didn’t fit in
I felt I was wrong
And then came the day
That my eyes came alight
You took me aside
You smiled so bright
And told me you loved me
That nothing else felt right.
I grabbed your hand
We went for a walk
And like best friends in a tree house
We didn’t need to talk.
i wrote this like last week for school. what do you guys think? sorry its so long. ;]
awww thats amazing
is it your first poem.
happytrail.
09-01-2008, 09:27 AM
all the tears that i cried, and there's
still no reason why. the red rose on
your bedside, wishing for a miracle
to occur. life is a blur without you here,
holding me tight. but i have to stand up
for myself, get all these thoughts detangled.
all the fights that we have ; it's nothing. it's
just our hearts in our chest, we're all a total
mess.
maisie st. cloud
09-01-2008, 10:05 AM
your insanity
makes me smile
in a way i can't comprehend
but for some reason
i know your bad for me
but i can't live without you
because you keep me from crashing and burning
because without you
i couldn't survive
your like my oxygen
as if there is no
atmospheric gas
so basically;
no air.
lonelynights.
09-01-2008, 11:23 AM
awww thats amazing
is it your first poem.
thank youu. ;] and kinda i wrote some other little ones but this is the first real one i tried to write.
happytrail.
09-01-2008, 06:14 PM
just one mistake. i can't understand,
any reason why you would try to hold
my hand. i'm a total mess, without your
touch, my heaven. the smell of your skin,
oh oh. it's gone. forever ; why can't this last?
the blood dripping off my fingertips, the cold
hands holding my hips, and my lips are lonely.
the red lipstick - that tears us apart. and all i can
do renew my heart, with your blood.
electric hearts.
09-01-2008, 06:16 PM
amazing :]
electric hearts.
09-01-2008, 06:20 PM
these words i told myself i'd never write,
are somehow making there way to this
blank piece of paper. slowly being filled
with words of anger, but changing into
something more than i imagined.
save me from myself, and what i'm
slowly becoming. i'm trying to conform
to a world that doesn't fit. it hurts more
than the pain that you left me with.
i'll suffer with this incredible weight
on my shoulders, the one you told me
you'd carry. your lies are drowning me,
and pulling me down. all i ask for is
the truth. your truth, and what you really are.
then i'll be able to find myself.
ugh.
i told myself i wouldn't write.
and on top of me writing,
it sucked.
maisie st. cloud
09-02-2008, 02:55 AM
don't pretend;
everyone can see its a phony little game you've been playing for years
the insanity in your eyes
it scares me;
makes my spine shiver to the core
as you look yourself in the mirror
you smile;
that fake little gesture you plaster on your face
acting like you care
you think i'm stupid?
well I can see pretty clearly
what you do
crocodile tears until people give you the attention you want
have you ever realized
that your living a life of a liar?
happytrail.
09-02-2008, 06:43 AM
^ amazing.
the candle is out of flame, our
love has slowly faded. anything that
happens between us, goes wrong. the car
crash- scares me to death. nothing can compare
to this moment, being with you. and holding your
hands ; finally.
maisie st. cloud
09-02-2008, 06:46 AM
^ amazing.
why thankyou [:
vegas.
09-02-2008, 08:24 AM
i've spent this lifetime waiting
on a broken dream. no one
really has their happy ever after,
do they? no one really finds
their prince charming.
all along i've known that - it's
something so blindingly obvious
i suppose, deep down, everyone
wants something to believe in
and when there's nothing there
you may as well believe in fairy tales
maisie st. cloud
09-02-2008, 08:32 AM
^ amazing sophie [:
electric hearts.
09-02-2008, 03:46 PM
good job, sophie. :]
vegas.
09-02-2008, 04:35 PM
thanks guys.
i don't know how i feel about it
but i'm like that with most of my poetry
freakshow.
09-02-2008, 04:41 PM
everything's amazing.
duh<3.
freakshow.
09-02-2008, 04:58 PM
my pain will wither away.
all this hurt, this sorrow.
we'll sing along with
the music as the rain falls,
and i'll take a piece of you,
holding it in my palm.
and maybe it'll fade away too,
slowly, death overtaking it.
you'll walk right through me,
making me catch my breath.
this is more than i can handle
on my own, so take me slowly.
like snow falls and leaves change
colors, wrap me up in your web.
i'm ready to leave this world,
in your arms.
electric hearts.
09-02-2008, 05:12 PM
that was really good.
i liked it a lot. :]
freakshow.
09-02-2008, 05:26 PM
thank you. <3
happytrail.
09-04-2008, 05:26 AM
i'm in this strange place, not knowing
who to talk to. nothing can compare to
this feeling, i want to know him. he's staring
back at me, wow he's gorgeous. but he's so
quiet, it's hard to ever let go of his eyes. let him
be the person he wants to be, i'll unravel, i'll let
him come to me. and if he does, one day, the sky
won't be as gray.
i wrote that for twilight. i just started reading it, i'm on page 36,
and i'm addicted to it.
----------
falling into pieces, i want to yell
at you so much. but i can't ; that incredible
touch. you made me cry so many times, how
can i tell you're not lying too? but all i know is
all i ever wanted was you.
maisie st. cloud
09-04-2008, 08:17 AM
in your heart i'll stay;
for the remains of today
then you walk straight through me
like i'm recognizable once;
and never again
i loved you
deschanel love
09-04-2008, 06:36 PM
everything you guys write is breath taking.
started out writing a poem but it soon changed into a song.
What happened to you’d never break my heart?
That promise you made back at the start
Back when we had that something, something special
My hand in yours felt so right I dreamt about you every night
You were mine and I was yours my heart unto you would pour
Covering you with love and affection we were headed in the right direction
What went wrong
You were the lyrics to my unsung song
The voice forever in my head those many months with no regrets
I really would give anything to have that back
You were my everything
Now we’re barely even friends
With the texts your sending it feels like the end
I knew there was not another chance for us but im still shocked
Your words they hurt they cut so deep
Wonder if I’ll be crying myself to sleep
I’m sorry I cant be that girl for you I refuse to bend all my rules
You gotta understand this is hard for me cause I still find it hard to breathe
What went wrong
You were the lyrics to my unsung song
The voice forever in my head those many months with no regrets
I really would give anything to have that back
You were my everything
Now we’re nothing but your something to me
But I feel like nothing and I am obviously
To you im just a girl but I wanna be your world
I wanna be your air to breathe a piece of me in everything you see
I just wanna hear my name on your lips like I mean something
What went wrong
You were the lyrics to my unsung song
The voice forever in my head
Those many months with no regrets
I really would give anything to have that back
You were my everything (everything) x3
(over final chorus)
My air to breathe
The world to me
Everything
You were my everything.
happytrail.
09-05-2008, 05:20 AM
^ aw thank you. and that was beautiful. :]
tears, i'm in this tradegy. people say
he'll fade magically. he tore me apart,
he made me feel alive, i don't know if
i'll survive without his touch, and all the
things he says are so beautiful, so true.
he pulls me close to his heart, i can hear
the beat, and the tangling of our feet. i found
him; he's mine. love is too hard to describe.
electric hearts.
09-05-2008, 12:36 PM
let the gray from your tears,
roll into my heart.
i'm not ready for the sun to shine,
i'm not deserving of it.
i'd like for you to forget me,
and whatever happened between us.
we are nothing,
now that the flame is put out.
let the world wash over our past,
our minds distracted, take this time
to walk away. push me away,
never let me back in.
ew. :/
<33ZacEfron
09-05-2008, 02:49 PM
ITS NOT EW
i love it
electric hearts.
09-05-2008, 02:54 PM
thanks
maisie st. cloud
09-05-2008, 02:55 PM
i begin to realize;
how wrong i have been about you
the true you shines from your heart
even though its been hard
we got through it;
like now the best of friends
not knowing where this friendship will ever take us.
eww.
freakshow.
09-05-2008, 04:05 PM
amazing peopleee.<3
deschanel love
09-05-2008, 07:41 PM
All of a sudden it means nothing
I mean nothing to you
Do I really mean so little?
I know I’m just a girl but once I was your world, or at least I thought I was
Maybe I’m just being stupid, maybe I was just part of your world
But you weren’t just a part of mine, you were my whole world
The air I breathed, the lyrics to my song, sun to my sky
You were more than something you were everything
I still think of you and have to catch my breath
Right now I feel like my heart is ready to explode out of my chest
I knew there wasn’t another chance for us but
.I didn’t expect to mean nothing
I didn’t realize I was that easily forgotten
Now I can keep that in mind, I wont waste my time
Thank you for showing me that I’m nothing
I’ll always just be a girl never the only girl
Never anyone’s world
Never
ugh.
afallfromgrace.
09-05-2008, 09:01 PM
is it possible for you guys to share
some talent ? ha, 'cause i need it. ;]
deschanel love
09-06-2008, 09:17 AM
psssh you have plenty talent of your own sweetheart :]
freakshow.
09-06-2008, 09:18 AM
i think i'm going to stop
writing poetry.
annzie
09-06-2008, 09:22 AM
i think i'm going to stop
writing poetry.
why? o:
freakshow.
09-06-2008, 09:23 AM
cause i suck at it. aha.
maisie st. cloud
09-06-2008, 10:14 AM
cause i suck at it. aha.
bri? are you crazy?!?
your amazing at it.
freakshow.
09-06-2008, 10:18 AM
but most of it doesn't make sense.
/:
annzie
09-06-2008, 10:19 AM
cause i suck at it. aha.
are you crazy?
you're amazing at poetry.
don't quit!
afallfromgrace.
09-06-2008, 11:04 AM
i think i'm going to stop
writing poetry.
whaaa ?
bri, if you stop. i'll hunt you down. (:
you have more peotry skills than i'll
ever have in one (insert scientific word here)
cell. :]
freakshow.
09-06-2008, 11:07 AM
haha. thanks you guys.
i just get bored with it.
cause i hate the way
it turns out.
<3
maisie st. cloud
09-06-2008, 11:33 AM
i'll build up my walls
they secure my soul
and my mind
my mind wanders
as does my soul
desirable dream
i need to break out.
of these securing white walls;
i grown into them
they bore me
staring at the same in-detailed intricate color
colorless
like glass
my body is too vunerable
i'm shattering;
because i'm glass.
zacy_efron_cuttie
09-06-2008, 01:54 PM
cause i suck at it. aha.
bri u must have been insane...!
ur the most amazing person i have ever seen writing poets...!!!!!
u never sucked
deschanel love
09-06-2008, 05:59 PM
briicakes you must be absolutely mental darling :]
if you stop writing i shall have to bite you.
So jealous of what they share
Its what I so badly want myself
What I’m yearning for
That kind of love that can’t be fought
No matter how hard you try
No number of fights, obstacles and distances can beat it
Nothing can change their love
I want that, I want it all
Someone that makes me feel alive
Someone that makes everyday worth waking up for
Someone that can make my day with just a few words or smile
Is it so much to want?
Why is it so hard for me to trust? I don’t like being vulnerable but I want somebody that can change that
I want somebody to break down my walls and get into my heart
A territory no one’s managed to get to since..him
He who defined love for me
He who shattered my heart into a million pieces
He who I still love even now; I cant get him out of my heart even though I know I’m nothing to him anymore
I need someone to make me believe that I can love again, love myself even
So unbelievably jealous at what they’ve found in each other, what they’ve brought out of each other ; how they’ve changed one another’s lives
I want it
I want it all.
freakshow.
09-06-2008, 06:02 PM
bri u must have been insane...!
ur the most amazing person i have ever seen writing poets...!!!!!
u never sucked
aw thank you.
i'll reconsider.
<3.
lonelynights.
09-06-2008, 06:06 PM
You’re wrong you know
I won’t let you get me down
I’m fighting you this time
Just sit and watch me grow
I saw you try to catch me
Drown me, stab me, hurt me
But I just won’t let that happen
Just stand and watch me run free
I’ve done this for the last time
I’m not giving up, I’m not giving in
Try as you might,
You just can’t win.
electric hearts.
09-06-2008, 06:34 PM
i think i'm going to stop
writing poetry.
bri,
you can't :[
your too amazing at
writing.
lauren..
09-06-2008, 07:08 PM
lmfao guys.
here's a poem i wrote for a free journal topic in english because i asked if it could be a repetitive poem, and she said yes. it took up the entire page, because that's what i really cared about, so i didn't really care about anything else in the poem.
my friend gave me the idea.
:]
come cat come
come cat come
come cat come
come cat come!
cross the street!
do not get run over!
do not get run over!
you can do it!
yay!
come cat come!
swiftly now,
through the cat flap.
you can do it!
come cat come.
stop cat stop!
do not collect!
200 dollars, that is.
that money is mine!
happytrail.
09-07-2008, 08:49 AM
watching the wind pass me by,
all the wonders, of why. you left
me. can't believe, i'm sitting alone,
watching the clouds fall. nothing that
i can do, but think about you. you know
all my secrets, but somehow you never
knew. you just rushed me, you made
me feel alive, but now i can't even look
at a picture hanging on the wall, because
of you i might fall. nothing i can do, but
see you. all my eyes, and my greatest
fears, coming to life, appearing in the sky,
oh oh, nothing ever changes.
afallfromgrace.
09-07-2008, 08:51 AM
ohmygodd.
amazing, sammie. (:
happytrail.
09-07-2008, 08:53 AM
^ thank you. :\
afallfromgrace.
09-07-2008, 09:37 AM
you're welcomee. (:
notice the smiley face is bold.
freakshow.
09-07-2008, 04:23 PM
the stars above shine for us,
and the breaths i take breathe for you.
my heart pumps inside my chest,
as you whisper in my ear.
the poison you've captivated
me with runs through my veins,
overtaking me. and i'll never
be the same.
this heart is healing, as you
take away the pain it's felt.
adolf.
09-07-2008, 04:25 PM
roses are red
violets are blue
i fxxked that bxxtch up
nd ill do it to you =]
afallfromgrace.
09-07-2008, 04:52 PM
^ ohmygod. ahahah.
...anyway. bri, that's amazingg.
total proof that you shan't quit. (:
freakshow.
09-07-2008, 06:16 PM
haha thank you britt<3.
if i were to lose you,
my heart would shatter.
into a million peices,
like windows of glass
sliding over my skin.
even if you're not here,
i feel your presence.
your smell, lingers on me.
your laugh, echos through
this empty house.
i know i'll be okay someday,
even if i lose my mind out
on this open rode.
this open rode to you.
as the petals fall to the ground
and wither away, i'll be thinking
of you. you and your perfect
smile, and love you give me.
these lies we speak will
enter through my heart
and turn into these words
that are written on the walls
of my bedroom, and the glass
will break, shattering me to peices.
electric hearts.
09-07-2008, 06:21 PM
that was amazing, bri.
electric hearts.
09-07-2008, 06:25 PM
my breathing only becomes worse,
like its a weight on my shoulders.
constricting my lungs,
harder for me to breathe by the moments.
i'm asking for your relief.
take this away from me. it brings
back the painful memories,
from when my heart shattered,
and you took my love from me. i'm only
trying to put myself back together,
trying to breathe again,
put me on the path that will lead me
to you, again. repeat everything you've said,
i'm forgetting all too quickly, every breath you took,
every word you spoke...every time you
told me you loved me. these vivid memories
only become blurrier. i can't take this,
i'm so desperate for your voice, for your touch.
my fingertips still linger on your last letter,
your scent still fills my lungs, and what's left of me.
ew. :/
freakshow.
09-07-2008, 06:29 PM
thanks. <3
and i LOVE that.
electric hearts.
09-07-2008, 06:31 PM
your welcome. :]
and thanks :]
afallfromgrace.
09-07-2008, 06:40 PM
wooow. i love it all. (:
happytrail.
09-08-2008, 05:23 AM
we used to be everything, something
more than everything. the dead red
rose was alive, and the lighting ignited
my veins with the blood supply. you're kiss,
the smile of heaven, and the warmth of under
the covers, so beautiful. can't imagine another
guy, being here with me tonight. someone caught
me again, holding my hand. true love? only time
will tell, wishing upon that shooting star that he'll come
and save me from my disaster.
---------------------------------------
what's left of me, all the oxygen
i breathe. the energy i run on, the
things that make my heart going. you're
gone. you left me on this cold floor, whimpering
for your voice. never would i leave you, i would
hold you - forever love. there's nothing left, you took
the life out of me, i'm lying on the floor, still where
you left me, the oxygen intoxicating my lungs. it touches
my skin, a shiver runs down my spine. nothing is the same.
the blood is slowly stopping, and my eyes are closing. where
did love go ?
happytrail.
09-09-2008, 05:31 AM
new song : unbreakable.
[verse one]
you walk by my side, my heart
doesn't know how to control, these
feelings. can't believe you, and your
pitful lies. you could say everything,
never get me back. just watch me
fall, you'll have it all, and i'll never
be reattached.
[chorus]
i try to break you,
but you just walk away, not
feeling anymore pain, you just
are unbreakable, i wish you would
fall, to see, how much you mean to
me. but you don't see a thing you
just leave, and you don't cry, all the
tears wish you would, you're just
unbreakable. [yeah.]
[chorus two.]
i wish i was just like you,
always standing strong, but
you just loose, every single
thing in your life,you don't
know anything. i cared for you,
i cried too, but you just leave
me alone. no comfort, no joy,
just this depression, like i'm
a toy.
[chorus]
[verse 3]
broke my heart in a million pieces,
how could believe this. loved you
so long, in your arms i belong. i can't
forget you, i want to kiss, i'll never regret
you, oh. so just come over here, and tell
me, that you want me back. stop being
so unbreakable, not showing your feelings.
[chorus]
afallfromgrace.
09-09-2008, 01:49 PM
sammie is.
amaazing.
<33ZacEfron
09-09-2008, 02:44 PM
I feel like just another mistake
A mismatched, misplaced figure
So uncertain;a lost person
My directions give mixed signals
I'm spinning in circles
Stuck in this maze
Searching for an exit;
A way out; an escape
But in the end it's hopeless
As soon as I find the door
I realize there is no key to be had
And I'm back at square one
Pacing the floors of my confinement
My desolate cell
I need to be free
I desperately must fly away
From all of this pain
I'm fading away
Freedom can't come any faster
electric hearts.
09-10-2008, 11:32 AM
i love that one, katrina. :]
electric hearts.
09-10-2008, 01:28 PM
breathe it in again, tell me how it feels.
the constant burning, he pain in your
voice. i'm torn inside, and this brokenness
is still lingering, longer than its wanted.
i'm trying to push it away, but it keeps
creeping back. i'm hoping for this day
to end, so that the darkness can soon
take over, i'm not deserving of the sun's
light, not yet. i'm just trying to catch my
breath, still gasping for the air that is never
going to be there. like i'm falling forever,
i'll never get back to you. you keep moving
farther away, and i'm following, as you disappear,
and i'm going slower. soon i'll come to a halt,
and you won't hear my cries. i'm calling you,
and you'll never answer me.
ew.
maisie st. cloud
09-10-2008, 01:45 PM
you follow my steps;
like your attached to me
say my words;
think my thoughts;
follow my dreams;
like your cloning me
don't follow in the shadows
shine like i know you can.
<33ZacEfron
09-10-2008, 03:58 PM
breathe it in again, tell me how it feels.
the constant burning, he pain in your
voice. i'm torn inside, and this brokenness
is still lingering, longer than its wanted.
i'm trying to push it away, but it keeps
creeping back. i'm hoping for this day
to end, so that the darkness can soon
take over, i'm not deserving of the sun's
light, not yet. i'm just trying to catch my
breath, still gasping for the air that is never
going to be there. like i'm falling forever,
i'll never get back to you. you keep moving
farther away, and i'm following, as you disappear,
and i'm going slower. soon i'll come to a halt,
and you won't hear my cries. i'm calling you,
and you'll never answer me.
ew.
loveee itt!!!!!!!!
electric hearts.
09-10-2008, 03:59 PM
thanks.
happytrail.
09-12-2008, 05:02 PM
[verse one.]
everything that you do,
pulls me back to you. you know
that i care so much, i would never
let you go. but they pull me away,
saying he's no good for you, leave
him stay, and let him be his own man,
with anybody. i'll take a breath, i'll run
away, i'll say to you, the meanest things,
i'll hit and scream, i'll have a dream, and nothing
will be clear.
[chorus.]
you're so amazing,
all the things that you do. i wish
the time would erase, but i miss
you so much. if i kept you in the
back of my mind, i think i would die
more a little more inside, my heart
is breaking, with every step you take.
[verse two.]
all the rumors going around,
everybody saying things without
a sound, it's the new fashion. can't
believe what you did, you have another
girlfriend, but i don't care, anymore. they'll
try to pull me away, yeah, but i wanna stay
another day.
[chorus.]
[verse three.]
you'll be my lovesong, forever.
even though we've never, been together.
i know that there would be something there,
and know that you are gone, in someones
arms, they want me to give up on you, but
i still believe it's true.
[chorus.]
happytrail.
09-12-2008, 05:08 PM
[chorus]
i can't breathe, when you are
close to me yeah. you always
leave me alone, but when you
come around, it's like i loose
my soul, and my hearts the ground,
i can't believe with me, tonight, is
the night, we'll be.
electric hearts.
09-12-2008, 05:11 PM
cut the strings.
let me fall. i've hit
the bottom, yet
i can't feel a thing.
i've went numb. and my
head is confused,
lost, even. i can't seem
to place my feet on solid ground,
or let my eyes focus.
its all to hazy, now.
and i've come to realize
the obvious. yet, i cannot let
those words out. i'm can't find the
words i want to use, and i'm only
spinning now. let me not feel
this anymore. i want to be free.
ew. :/
afallfromgrace.
09-12-2008, 05:12 PM
guess what. iloveitall. (:
you guys are super talented.
electric hearts.
09-12-2008, 07:03 PM
i'm looking around these crowded halls,
and just trying to get by. i'm screaming
at the top of my lungs,
not a head turns. i'm just trying to breathe,
and the air becomes so much heavier,
filled with the guilt that i have,
and the burdens that this cruel world has set
upon me. i'm waiting to just crumble,
what other resort do i have? i'm so alone,
yet i'll never show it on my face.
the things i hide, and what i never wish to show,
too great for the mind to handle.
i hope that i'll never lose control.
yet my grip is slipping too soon,
and i don't think i could hold on much longer,
i'll take a breath, and prepare for it all.
eh. it was bleh.
adolf.
09-12-2008, 07:04 PM
diamonds are foreverr
diamonds are foreverr
diamonds are foreverr
adolf.
09-12-2008, 07:06 PM
roses are red
violets are green
open your legs and i'll fill you with cream
;D
afallfromgrace.
09-12-2008, 07:14 PM
i'm looking around these crowded halls,
and just trying to get by. i'm screaming
at the top of my lungs,
not a head turns. i'm just trying to breathe,
and the air becomes so much heavier,
filled with the guilt that i have,
and the burdens that this cruel world has set
upon me. i'm waiting to just crumble,
what other resort do i have? i'm so alone,
yet i'll never show it on my face.
the things i hide, and what i never wish to show,
too great for the mind to handle.
i hope that i'll never lose control.
yet my grip is slipping too soon,
and i don't think i could hold on much longer,
i'll take a breath, and prepare for it all.
eh. it was bleh.
not bleh at all. word choice is fantastic.
not a syllable is bleh in this. i'd leave it
just like this. it's absolutely amazing.
electric hearts.
09-12-2008, 07:19 PM
not bleh at all. word choice is fantastic.
not a syllable is bleh in this. i'd leave it
just like this. it's absolutely amazing.
thank youuu brittany.
wait, are you brittany or britt?
which do you like better?
afallfromgrace.
09-12-2008, 07:24 PM
haha, either one is fine. (:
electric hearts.
09-12-2008, 07:28 PM
haha okay.
well, i'm just liz.
haha. :]
afallfromgrace.
09-12-2008, 07:37 PM
okay, hahaha. (:
ugh. i can't find the energy to write.
babysitting wears me outt.
electric hearts.
09-12-2008, 07:40 PM
haha.
i think you shoulddd.
when you get the energy,
the amazing brittany needs
to use her amazing talents and write.
because i know she cannn :]
afallfromgrace.
09-12-2008, 07:49 PM
hahah. trust me, it won't be all that
amazing. at all. but i'll try my hardest
maybe after this kid maybe catches a
blink of sleep. (:
electric hearts.
09-12-2008, 07:51 PM
haha. yay.
i hope you do.
because i know it will be amazing,
no matter what you say.
i know you have lots of
amazingness in youuuu :]
afallfromgrace.
09-12-2008, 08:02 PM
hmm. i don't know about that.
but i'll try. haha. (:
afallfromgrace.
09-12-2008, 09:15 PM
these hallways of strangers are flooding my
brain. these small lungs filled with screams
waiting to be let out with such pain. i can't
find these words to speak. but when i do,
will you be there even when i'm weak? avoiding
these thoughts is drowning my heart. i just
can't leave it alone, the way i've felt this way
from the start. i've never felt so alone in this
crowd of familiar faces, names i don't know.
taking in every grin and giggle that, when i
turn, begins to grow. i need to adjust to this
element where everyone sees me as an outcast,
just to be so assured and visible in your eyes
that i'm trying to grasp. this cold rush running
up my spine, how i'm waiting for it to be the
right time. this emotion following me everywhere,
it's swallowing me whole. and these sounds of
static sinking deeper into this hold. i've never
had such a stormy season. this little doubt
that prevents me from showing a little reason.
not comfortable in my home or skin. the way
you're taking in every flaw that's filled to the
brim. these tenuous moments of dignity drained
from the core. how i've wished for so much
more. i'll just be left behind full of hope,
aspiration, while you sit there avoiding
contact, conversation. you'll regret digging
deep to my real self. so here's your chance
to gain my trust, to prove yourself.
ugh. that totally sucked. |:
deschanel love
09-12-2008, 11:49 PM
Oh my gosh that didnt suck at all its amazing!!
electric hearts.
09-13-2008, 06:09 AM
these hallways of strangers are flooding my
brain. these small lungs filled with screams
waiting to be let out with such pain. i can't
find these words to speak. but when i do,
will you be there even when i'm weak? avoiding
these thoughts are drowning my heart. i just
can't leave it alone, the way i've felt this way
from the start. i've never felt so alone in this
crowd of familiar faces, names i don't know.
taking in every grin and giggle that, when i
turn, begins to grow. i need to adjust to this
element where everyone sees me as an outcast,
just to be so assured and visible in your eyes
that i'm trying to grasp. this cold rush running
up my spine, how i'm waiting for it to be the
right time. this emotion following me everywhere,
it's swallowing me whole. and these sounds of
static sinking deeper into this hold. i've never
had such a stormy season. this little doubt
that prevents me from showing a little reason.
not comfortable in my home or skin. the way
you're taking in every flaw that's filled to the
brim. these tenuous moments of dignity drained
from the core. how i've wished for so much
more. i'll just be left behind full of hope,
aspiration, while you sit there avoiding
contact, conversation. you'll regret digging
deep to my real self. so here's your chance
to gain my trust, to prove yourself.
ugh. that totally sucked. |:
this is amazing.
i knew you had it in you to write so good.
and i love this one.
great job brittany :]
maisie st. cloud
09-13-2008, 06:18 AM
i believed you had a good soul
obviously not what i expected
twisted and evil;
well you were back then.
i can see the sorrow in your deepened eyes
words are only words.
but words can hurt a soul
tear it. break it. wreck it.
you tore me apart
never one sign of an apology
never the decency to make me realize you never meant it
but i think you did
but now i have nothing to do with you.
your nice to all the other people
never me.
never me.
it was never me
and it never will be
have you heard of first impressions?
yeah. you had your chance and now i can't make a change
if you hate me; i'm not sure.
but if so;
then the feeling is neutral.
afallfromgrace.
09-13-2008, 08:33 AM
^ wow. i love that. that's amazing.
Oh my gosh that didnt suck at all its amazing!!
this is amazing.
i knew you had it in you to write so good.
and i love this one.
great job brittany :]
thanks, you two. a whole bunch. (:
maisie st. cloud
09-13-2008, 08:46 AM
^ wow. i love that. that's amazing
why thankyou <3 [:
csws.
09-13-2008, 08:51 AM
i cut my wrists,
thinking everything will be alright
the pain, suffering, and crying
all gone
i bleed for you
the cries i scream out
come from my heart
you made me do this to myself
why oh why, did i fall in love with you ?
it wasnt even worth it anyway.
blah. major crap.
i just wrote it.
maisie st. cloud
09-13-2008, 08:56 AM
you never memorized my face;
i'm just a shadow in the meer darkness of your soul
ignorance.
you can't see me;
you can't see oxygen either
but its still there
like i'm still waiting for you to notice me
i'll be stuck behind the barriers waiting for you to let me in your heart
cause it'll all restart.
csws.
09-13-2008, 08:57 AM
love it maisie.
electric hearts.
09-13-2008, 08:59 AM
i believed you had a good soul
obviously not what i expected
twisted and evil;
well you were back then.
i can see the sorrow in your deepened eyes
words are only words.
but words can hurt a soul
tear it. break it. wreck it.
you tore me apart
never one sign of an apology
never the decency to make me realize you never meant it
but i think you did
but now i have nothing to do with you.
your nice to all the other people
never me.
never me.
it was never me
and it never will be
have you heard of first impressions?
yeah. you had your chance and now i can't make a change
if you hate me; i'm not sure.
but if so;
then the feeling is neutral.
love this. :]
maisie st. cloud
09-13-2008, 09:01 AM
thankyou liz (:
electric hearts.
09-13-2008, 09:02 AM
i'll take a breath, you'll be the last one i see.
i'm heading down this dark path,
i can't see where i'm taking myself,
i'm letting my mind wander, with the many
thoughts i dream. i can't even focus on one thing,
because its just a blur. theres no need
for me to remember this, it hurts so bad.
i'm just trying to be like you,
so perfect, so unchangeable to the world.
you never get affected from what's around you.
unlike me, i'm broken and my head's a mess.
i can't seem to think about much anymore,
because i feel like i'm just going in a circle.
i just wish i could go back in time,
and realize that i was wrong from the start.
ew.
that sucked times a billion.
maisie st. cloud
09-13-2008, 09:05 AM
i'll take a breath, you'll be the last one i see.
i'm heading down this dark path,
i can't see where i'm taking myself,
i'm letting my mind wander, with the many
thoughts i dream. i can't even focus on one thing,
because its just a blur. theres no need
for me to remember this, it hurts so bad.
i'm just trying to be like you,
so perfect, so unchangeable to the world.
you never get affected from what's around you.
unlike me, i'm broken and my head's a mess.
i can't seem to think about much anymore,
because i feel like i'm just going in a circle.
i just wish i could go back in time,
and realize that i was wrong from the start.
ew.
that sucked times a billion.
no it didn't liz it was amazingfully amazing (:
electric hearts.
09-13-2008, 09:06 AM
i don't want to see my words come alive, yet.
they've been lingering on my lips for so long,
practically breaking me down. i have so much to say,
yet i cannot let it out. i can't. i've stitched myself together,
because i'm afraid. i'm afraid of falling apart all over again.
its taken too much time to put myself together,
i'm not taking the risk. i'd love to just hear your voice,
let alone my own. i've been trapped in my mind, my thoughts,
since you've taken my heart, and shattered it. i'm not
capable of this, its just hard to breathe. i'll try not to listen
to myself, because it makes me want to scream.
you'll only see my lips part, when i take my last breath.
i'm wishing for you to just notice, notice me again.
i'm tired of being trapped. and falling, falling in this pit,
over and over again, i'll never hit the bottom,
until i've run out, and theres nothing left for me to give. i'll just
let you take my all. i cannot say anything else,
i've said the words that i wanted you to hear,
yet i'll never say the words that i'll regret.
ew.
again.
still, that sucked. :/
csws.
09-13-2008, 09:07 AM
running from the future
running and running
finally i stop, out of breath
the pain that i am feeling
a kind of pain that
controls me, breaks me down to pieces
the kind of pain that no one should ever have
the thoughts build up inside my head
playing over and over like a movie in my mind
i try to shake them out
trying and trying
but they stay there, in my deepest thought.
hating life, cutting, depression, thinking of suicide
those are not the thought a normal person has
why does this have to happen to me
why did i choose to think this way
that thought haunts me till i find death.
bleh.
afallfromgrace.
09-13-2008, 09:08 AM
wow. stunning. all of them.
where do you guys get "sucked" from?
because all i see is total amazingness. (:
that's totally abso-fricking-lutely fantastic.
maisie st. cloud
09-13-2008, 09:10 AM
this day finally came
when the rain would pour down
the raindrops;
each single one;
drizzle down the windows
slower than others;
would race down.
i used to think it was the clouds crying
but i realize its you;
trapped the kingdom called heaven.
deschanel love
09-13-2008, 09:51 AM
these cold tears rolling down my cheeks
your arms holding me
your heart so open
i'm prepared to collide if only you knew
i can still smell you on my shirt
smell your sweet scent on my skin
cant stop thinking about you
cant get that gorgeous smile outta my mind
i try to tell myself your just a friend but that would be a lie
ive fallen hard as i can;unintentionable but so comfortable
your arms are where i belong;its where i want to be
when your holding me i wish it could last forever
our friendship's important but we're so much more
you know it;i know it;they all know it
come on lets take a chance
give it a shot
i know its worth it.
eww.icky icky icky.
csws.
09-13-2008, 10:00 AM
^ lovely.
so amazing
vegas.
09-13-2008, 01:47 PM
a million and one thousand things
whisper in my ear
tell me all the secrets and lies
i never asked to hear
and through all the mist and haze
its only you i see
but do i shun, or believe
all that we could be
i could listen to their words
or let them pass me by
but baby know whatever,
i'll dry the tears you cry
there's only so much one person
can ever mean to me
and baby its you, its always been you,
thats why i have to set you free
ew.ew.ew.ew.ew.ew.
and did i say ew?
freakshow.
09-13-2008, 01:57 PM
wrote what's in my sig.
electric hearts.
09-13-2008, 02:57 PM
everyone = amazing.
afallfromgrace.
09-13-2008, 02:58 PM
^ very true.
csws.
09-13-2008, 03:00 PM
everyone's stuff is amazing.
happytrail.
09-13-2008, 05:20 PM
you would'nt scream at me,
when i told you to.you just left,
to be with her. and i'm stuck with him,
you're brother. what should i do? you don't
care. i'm pulling away from you, staying away.
not wanting to let go, but all you've done has broke
my heart. it's nothing i can fix. i made a simple mistake,
my first time, please forgive me, tell me what you feel. don't
hide it. and you do, you don't care about me, never again will
i trust you. i'll cry in his arms, and i'll be thinking about you, as he
tells me his story, as techno colors pop in my head. and i think about
you, and you just forget that i'm even alive.
written for my rp.
afallfromgrace.
09-13-2008, 10:38 PM
and sammie, that's absolutely amazing. (:
i'm taking this path, living in the past.
hoping i'll see your face sometime when
i'm weak. maybe then, i'll look forward
to seeing where this road leads. these
autumn mornings and winter nights, the
way your eyes of amber dance with light.
i've never been so found, but baby, so lost.
melting from the heat, but frigid from such
frost. our mistakes buried in your tides of
blue, forgotten love. giving every little
thing that's never enough. secrets of our
memories coming through mist. how i've traced
every moment since that last kiss.
ugh. that makes no sense. sorry for
wasting your time.
electric hearts.
09-14-2008, 04:37 AM
no, that was really good, like amazing.
i love all the words you used,
it just makes it even better. :]
maisie st. cloud
09-14-2008, 04:52 AM
you never realized i knew
you were a liar
crying tears
just for show
pretending you cared
ha. yeah right!
i caught you out
you thought i was stupid
you thought you could treat me like dirt
i'm a fighter. always have been. so what makes you think i'm gonna stop now?
i was strong enough
i fought back
and i won.
you were finally defeated.
that's the last time ill fight.
and that's the last time i'll have to.
csws.
09-14-2008, 10:17 AM
images of us together
running through my mind
the walks on the beach,
our toes in the sand,
laying in the tall, tall grass,
watching shooting stars fall from the sky,
and making wishes on everyone we saw,
these memories will never fade from my mind,
we were strong then, still strong as ever
we are broken up, but still care deeply about one another
afallfromgrace.
09-14-2008, 10:26 AM
maisie is amazing. (:
like i saidd. i love it, kaiti.
uber fantastico.
and thanks, liz.
maisie st. cloud
09-14-2008, 10:57 AM
maisie is amazing
haha thanks.
freakshow.
09-14-2008, 11:02 AM
within this heart lies your name,
written like poetry on notebook paper.
darkness turns to light slowly,
as i see your perfect face,
smiling back at me.
this rainy day is more than
i can handle, alone in this
room with you.
and the raindrops pound
the roof, hardly covering
the sound of my heart beating.
your hands touch mine,
and i swear i can't breathe.
my arms are as cold as ice,
and melt as you touch them.
the lightning strikes, and i
feel alone for just a moment,
but realize there's your hands
on mine, and i can breathe again.
i can't believe this is it,
the end of all my pain, suffering.
i can't believe, i swear it's true.
vegas.
09-14-2008, 11:04 AM
everyone is too amazing.
our words linger in the air
i can smell them, taste them
bitter and harsh and cold
just how we meant them to be
you've got a hold on my heart
an iron-fisted grip, and i'm gone
just a helpless pawn in this game
of passion and hatred that you're
so obsessed with playing
and i'm sick of responding to
your every word and begging
at your destructive feet
i'm sick of you and your twisted
words, bitter and harsh and cold
ick.
freakshow.
09-14-2008, 11:04 AM
amazinggg.
[:
csws.
09-14-2008, 11:06 AM
love them.
maisie st. cloud
09-14-2008, 11:37 AM
your stabbing the wounds
of my heart
with the sharpest words
that could cut my soul
the wounds heal
you stab again and again
the blood stains
seem warm now
so usual
so comforting
you stab
they heal
i cry
and then your jobs done.
you tried to kill my heart
much worse than breaking
my heart.
csws.
09-14-2008, 11:42 AM
love it maisie.
amazing
maisie st. cloud
09-14-2008, 11:46 AM
thanks kaiti [:
csws.
09-14-2008, 11:48 AM
your welcome :]
vegas.
09-15-2008, 09:51 AM
i feel rather accomplished today.
i wrote a poem that i'm actually extremely proud of.
unfortunately, i wrote it during my textiles class on the
back of a piece of work, and i left my textiles folder
in the cupboard at school and can't remember the poem
exactly. but i'll have it up here tomorrow, because i have
textiles again.
maisie st. cloud
09-15-2008, 10:20 AM
cool.
electric hearts.
09-15-2008, 02:26 PM
i won't compare you to your past.
never will i forget.
i'll let the memories linger,
time and time again.
take me as i am,
i doubt i could change.
this fragile state i'm in
is seeming to last too long.
i gave you everything.
what more do you want?
i'm empty. ready to be filled,
but you'll take none of me.
happytrail.
09-16-2008, 05:09 AM
what i have done, everything is falling
between us. i'm crying in your arms now,
but now what? i can't say anything to you
without disapointing you. it's incredible, how
strong you are. i just told you my deepest secrets,
hopefully you keep them. behind this computer screen,
i'm crying. you know. and when i'm with you, i'm so
mad, can't even bring words to you. for you betrayed my
soul, and never let me go.
vegas.
09-16-2008, 11:09 AM
^^^ both amazing.
this is what i got today on one of my youtube videos [my only one atm]:
you fuuucking loser writing poetry. get a life !!!!!
yeah. thanks for that.
electric hearts.
09-16-2008, 02:27 PM
that is so mean.
i'm so sorry, sophie.
don't even listen to that person,
please don't, sophie. because
it isn't true. its not true at all.
i'm sorry.
csws.
09-16-2008, 04:52 PM
you write AMAZING poetry sophle
<33ZacEfron
09-16-2008, 06:39 PM
Complicated ties
Interwoven paths
Unwanted goodbyes
Explosive wrath
Searing pain
Aching gap
Nothing gained
Heart unwrapped
Unraveling pieces
Holding fast
Tears cease
Staggering contrast
Moving on
Sun appears
Now gone
My dear
New day
Stand tall
Connections fray
Forget all
electric hearts.
09-16-2008, 06:48 PM
that was really cool, katrina.
FRANKENTEEN.
09-16-2008, 06:54 PM
you don't know what it's like
for everything to feel wrong,
and you don't know what it's like,
when your smiles gone.
when you've lost all hope,
and no one can save you.
when you're hanging by a shredded rope,
and no one can seem to help you.
you're slipping off the edge,
you just want to smile and laugh again.
you're tearing at the seems,
and all you want is to be free.
yeah, that sucked.
electric hearts.
09-16-2008, 06:58 PM
that did not suck.
that was really really good.
FRANKENTEEN.
09-16-2008, 07:08 PM
another one;
the multiple eyes,
they watch you.
the whispered lies,
they taunt you.
you say you can't be broken,
and you say that you'll be strong.
for you don't hear the words left unspoken,
but you're oh so wrong baby, oh so wrong.
but try not to fall,
try not to stumble.
even if i've got to crawl,
i'll try not to let you fumble.
you've got to see through your imperfections,
you're got to try to smile,
for every pair of eyes are testing you.
you'll see how everything is worth the while.
another suckish one, and thankss.
lonelynights.
09-16-2008, 07:15 PM
The darkness is something that comes in time.
But I fear my time may be up.
I cannot face what lies ahead.
I’m afraid and confused and I want to go back.
To that time when all was careless and free.
When I saw only light with nothing to fear.
But the darkness, the silence, the loneliness comes for me
I’m shaking with dread, my eyes are closed tight.
I’m lost and alone and there’s no where to go.
My last hope is you, but is it too late?
Did my ignorance of love put me here?
Is it all my own fault?
My thoughts won’t clear, I can’t picture your face.
I’m done, this is over, I’ve ruined it long ago.
But I saw a light, I see your face.
And your eyes become my saving grace.
I’m told to be still, while there’s motion around me.
But I can’t contain it. I have to say it.
I smile, eyes spilling, and tell you, I love you.
maisie st. cloud
09-17-2008, 09:57 AM
i fell too fast for you
my mind imagined that we'd last.
fragile kisses
like you never showed emotion
you like i'm a doll
use me when you want me
how stupid was i to believe
believe in destiny.
<33ZacEfron
09-17-2008, 12:56 PM
that was really cool, katrina.
haha thanks.
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